Mistake #15 – Too many characters! After consulting on a script last week, the writer asked me, “Is there anything in my script that screams amateur?” I found that to be an interesting question. As writers, avoiding that amateur status is a must. No one wants to cluelessly show up to their first hockey practice […]

Genre: Sci-fi Premise: In a universe where men are dying off, a sexy star-cruising bounty hunter named Barbarella finds herself caught up in a plan to save them. About: The original Barbarella movie, made in 1968, was a critical failure. But a lot of good things came out of it. The costume design had an […]

Genre: TV Pilot (Drama) Premise: After tragedy sends a local judge into a spiritual awakening, he starts making judgements based on faith over fact. About: Amazon is tired of being left out of the TV discussion so they’ve decided to come hard to the table. “Hand of God” will star everyone’s favorite character actor, Ron […]

Genre: Crime/Comedy Premise: When the female TV star for a popular children’s show commits suicide, two low-life investigators are hired to look into claims that a dead-ringer for the actress has been seen around town. About: One of the biggest specs out there right now, “The Nice Guys” has actually been around for over a […]

Get Your Script Reviewed On Scriptshadow!: To submit your script for an Amateur Review, send in a PDF of your script, along with the title, genre, logline, and finally, something interesting about yourself and/or your script that you’d like us to post along with the script if reviewed. Use my submission address please: Carsonreeves3@gmail.com. Remember […]