Genre: Suspense Premise: (winning logline) A recently demoted executive finds himself being harassed by a dangerous thug sitting next to him on the last bus back home to the suburbs. About: The Short Story Showdown was one of the tightest races we’ve ever had. The top three vote-getters were separated by less than 3 votes. […]

Week 1 – Concept Week 2 – Solidifying Your Concept Week 3 – Building Your Characters Week 4 – Outlining Week 5 – The First 10 Pages Week 6 – Inciting Incident Week 7 – Turn Into 2nd Act Week 8 – Fun and Games Week 9 – Using Sequences to Tackle Your Second Act […]

I originally started reading a script to review today. It was called “Propel.” It starts off with this ocean diver woman and she goes diving with a partner. Then, out of nowhere, this whale comes screeching by. It’s upset because it’s got a net caught on its head. She somehow ends up in its mouth. […]

Of the many discussion points that have come out of this movie, the one I care most about is that Tom Burke (Praetorian Jack) now needs to be in every single movie going forward for the next 50 years Genre: Action/Sci-fi/Epic Premise: A young girl is taken from her people, grows up in a desolate […]

Sorry about the late post. It took me a lot longer to get through all the entries due to the fact that I not only had to read the loglines, but the first pages as well! It made choosing contestants hard. There were some great loglines that had weak first pages. And there were some […]