The second episode always reveals the truth of whether you have a good show or a bad one If you couldn’t tell by now, I’m fascinated by this series. I think it’s kinda gangster, and also kinda insane, to try and make a show that looks exactly like another show that happens to be one […]

It’s here! If you are unaware what the Logline Showdown is, every second-to-last Friday of the month, I will post five loglines that were submitted to me. You, the readers of this site, will then vote for your favorite in the comments section. I will then review the script of the logline that received the […]

As I continue to read tons of amateur screenplays for my consulting services, I’ve noticed that I continue to give one note again and again. That note is, “Take a risk!” Take a risk SOMEWHERE in your screenplay. Because if you don’t take any risks at all, it’s very hard to write a screenplay that […]

Today’s script JUST SET THE BAR for 2023!!! Genre: Sci-Fi Comedy Premise: A low-level worker on a spaceship run by a dark god must steal the most powerful weapon in the universe to save his workplace crush. About: This script finished Top 10 on last year’s Black List. The writer has a lot of credits […]

Genre: Drama Premise: A pregnant pizza delivery girl becomes infatuated with a customer, a mother desperately trying to raise a son on her own. About: This script finished top 5 on last year’s Black List. The writer is very new and green. She has one produced credit, writing an episode of Law and Order: Organized […]