This post is reserved for the 2024 Black List
I will post my thoughts on every single entry as soon as the list is posted. It is supposed to be announced at 9am Pacific this morning (Tuesday). However, I expect that Franklin gonna Franklin and draw the list out in some weird inconvenient way. In the meantime, feel free to share your opinions about the fabled list. Will it return to its former glory? Or will it spit out another cadre of second-rate stories? I shall hope for the former!
*****THE LIST HAS BEEN POSTED!****
The 2024 Black List is here. Lest you get confused by the comment section, I put this post up a full 12 hours before the Black List dropped, so a lot of comments discuss what’s to come rather than what already came. Sounds like my last date.
My initial assessment of this year’s loglines is that we are moving back towards entertaining scripts rather than scripts that are so message-driven that they feel like they belong in the Oscars’ international documentary category.
We’ve got a 3 million dollar sale on this year’s list. A 2 million dollar sale. A 1 million dollar sale. We’ve got a script that finished in third place – THIRD PLACE! – on one of the Scriptshadow Amateur Showdowns. We’ve got a script from an amateur writer who got a review here 15 YEARS AGO! Are we excited yet?
Since these posts are a million words long, there will be spelling and grammar mistakes. I will continue to correct them throughout the day. But I wanted to get this up as soon as possible.
Here we go!
One Night Only
60 votes
Travis Braun
Two strangers scramble to find someone to sleep with on the one night of the
year when premarital sex is legal.
SS Breakdown: I’m going to need fact-checkers on this but I believe this is the first time in history that we have a writer with back to back number 1 scripts on the Black List. I liked Braun’s dog POV winner from last year so I’m excited to read this one as well. With that said, the concept doesn’t get me very jazzed. It’s one of those “made up rules” scripts where the writer just makes up a rule and we have to go with it. With that said, that approach made The Purge a hundreds of millions dollar franchise.
[ ] must read [x] curious [ ] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Playdate
39 votes
Marie Østerbye
When taking her daughter to a playdate at a new friend’s house, Alice suddenly comes face to face with her childhood bully, Katrine. An evening of seemingly polite dinner conversation and catching up turns into a night of psychological warfare as the two women reveal the scars of the past and the wounds of the present while their two young daughters play mind games
SS Breakdown: This is giving me “Carnage” vibes, a movie that I only recently saw. I like these story setups. Not just for the inherent conflict. But because of the attempts to remain civilized and above the conflict. That battle within the characters to stay chill, even though they’re enraged, creates a lot of subtext in the dialogue. This could be good.
[ ] must read [x] curious [ ] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Alignment
38 Votes
Natan Dotan
A low level worker at a cutting edge tech firm is challenged by the company’s previous fallen CEO to find out what a mysterious recently fired AI coder was working on.
SS Breakdown: We’re going to keep it 100 here. The only reason this script made the list is because it was the biggest sale of the year (a detail, by the way, that may not even be true). Everything about this script feels suspicious. It’s not well-written. It’s a ripoff of Margin Call. It feels like AI wrote it in places. Somehow a non-studio had 3 million dollars lying around to buy it. I suppose when your script gets this much exposure, it’s hard not to make the Black List. But I’m not in support of this choice. Lame script.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [ ] if I have to [x] won’t read (even though I already did)
Love of Your Life
37 Votes
Julia Cox
A young woman meets a man and they fall in love quickly. But then they encounter a devastating setback that will change the direction of both of their lives forever.
SS Breakdown: I already reviewed this one and really liked it. It’s a good example of a script that breaks the rules (of a spec script, at least) yet still comes out on top. The way that almost always happens is that you like the characters, which is exactly the case with Love of Your Life. A couple of unexpected plot developments keep the story exciting. A well-deserved Black List entry.
[x] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
How to Save a Marriage
29 votes
Ross Evans
In hopes of spicing up their marriage, a husband and wife join a mysterious
couples retreat, only to discover it’s a front for a dangerous cult.
SS Breakdown: Even though cult scripts are as common as Hailey Bieber smoothies in West Hollywood these days, I’m still a fan of them. This is the script that Robert Pattinson is lightly attached to (he will probably play the lead). It sold for a million bucks because of his involvement. There’s already a really good version of this script on my Top 25 called The Process. I liked that one so much I met with the writer. Extremely nice guy. We’ll see if “Marriage” can top it.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Don’t Borrow Trouble
28 votes
Caroline Glenn
A broke TaskRabbit in debt to her estranged sugar daddy holds a stolen painting
she’s been tasked to deliver for ransom, leading to a deadly cat-and-mouse chase
across the weirdest corners of New York City.
SS Breakdown: Hmmm. Either a clueless manager came up with this logline or this concept’s got serious problems. In every logline, you want that featured “big thing” that’s the hook (i.e. a script told thorugh the POV of a dog). If, however, you throw in tons of “big things” (taskrabbit, estranged sugar daddy, stolen painting), the reader becomes confused as to what the script is about. That’s what’s happening here with me.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [x] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Zaddy
25 votes
Sarah Ramos
Twenty-something fitness instructor Ellie Noone has been toiling away in the LA
rat race for years, until her luck changes when she meets an attractive older man
with a mysterious past that’s as complicated as his skincare routine.
SS Breakdown: I’ve talked about this before. Take a pop culture buzzword, make it your title, and write a script about it. “Zaddy” is a better title than, “Rat Race” for example. The logline, however, is lacking. You always want to end a logline on high. This one ends it on the least interesting thing about the concept (the antagonist’s skin care routine).
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Clean Break
24 votes
Ryan Brennan
Mary, a hair trigger pool hustler, has her hedonistic lifestyle all figured out until
she meets Ray, a fellow pool shark. Will she change her ways and let herself fall in
love? Or just kill him and make a break for it…
SS Breakdown: Dualing pool sharks with a romantic subplot? Not bad. Kinda feels like it should’ve come out in 1977 but to the writer’s credit, I haven’t seen the idea come up since then. The inherent sexual tension could make this one a winner.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Tickle Me Elmo
24 votes
Aaron Karo
The true story of how one toy saved Sesame Street, shocked Wall Street, and
tickled the nation.
SS Breakdown: I will not put this lightly. I haaaaaaaayyyyte these scripts. They seem so obvious to me. They’re basically biopics without the one thing that can save a biopic – an interesting main character. The only way this script works is if it’s weird AF. Like the main character is Elmo existing in an otherwise human world.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [ ] if I have to [x] won’t read
Bust
23 votes
Matt Ackles
In 1991, Houston, Texas, millions of women sport the latest fashion trend: breast implants. But when they develop life-threatening side effects, they’ll need a special kind of lawyer to seek justice. This is the incredible true story of a women’s public health crisis, a gunslinging plaintiff lawyer, and the biggest lawsuit in American history.
SS Breakdown: These movies get made. So I’m not surprised this was written. And a breast implant legal scandel is at least more original than another environmental poison legal scandal. These scripts always depend on the lawyer. If that character is a standout, the script’s got a chance. I’m already seeing the concept quality drop and we’re just barely out of the top 10!
[ ] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [x] if I have to [ ] won’t read
The 7 Guys You Date Before Marriage
22 votes
Julia Yorks
After her ten-year relationship collapses, a newly single woman dives back into the dating pool, navigating seven wildly different romantic entanglements that prepare her for her future husband.
SS Breakdown: Hello the year 2003. Can I have my romantic comedy idea back? Jussssssst kidding. Kinda. I’m a proponent of bringing back the studio rom-com. So I’m here for any new entry in the genre. But this one feels a little too familiar. And a little too dated.
Nasty
22 votes
Isabella Jarosz
After an injury sidelines Dylan’s ability to train for the Olympics, the determined gymnast must regain the trust of her demanding coach while facing off against a prodigious new competitor threatening to eclipse her place in the spotlight.
SS Breakdown: Well this sounds… like the most generic version of a gymnast idea that I’ve ever heard in my life. I suppose the concept has high stakes. But like I said, a logline needs that one standout element. I’m not seeing that here.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [x] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Vanished
22 votes
Samuel Franco & Evan Kilgore
Ten years after she disappeared as a teen, Violet, now 25, turns up with no memory of what happened to her, but as her family welcomes her home, it quickly becomes apparent that the past cannot be forgiven or forgotten.
SS Breakdown: These two had a big script that hit the trades ten years ago called Mayday 109. The logline was, “The story of how a young World War 2 Navy commander saved a group of men after their ship was destroyed by the Japanese. That man? John F. Kennedy.” The script didn’t have enough firepower to wow me or anyone else, so the script didn’t get purchased. This logline indicates they’re playing in a more fictional sandbox. Nothing in the logline stands out, though, so I’m not excited. Man, the list has REALLY fallen off from the top 10. We need a script to save us!
[ ] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [x] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Assembly Required
20 votes
Kevin Yang
During a clandestine overnight stay in the Burbank IKEA, four friends get caught in a firefight between rival criminal organizations, forcing them to figure out how to save each other–and the store they love so much.
SS Breakdown: Yikes! Just months after I posted a review of Horrorstor, we now have ANOTHER Ikea idea. This one is more of a crime script and since I like contained setups like it, I’m willing to give it a chance. Fun title.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Test Drive
20 votes
Matt Venne
A down-on-his-luck car salesman takes a mysterious stranger on a test drive–
which turns into a dangerous and unsettling crime spree across the rain-soaked
streets of Los Angeles.
SS Breakdown: One of my favorite movies ever is Training Day and this concept has Training Day vibes to it. I would’ve liked to know more about the stranger in the logline. Calling him mysterious is the equivalent of telling me nothing. But I’ll still check this out.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Bloody Mingo
19 votes
Jonathan Easley
Investigating the crime scene of a potential homicide in the Appalachian mountainside, a deputy encounters a strange mountain community that claims to be haunted by an evil witch that lives in the woods.
SS Breakdown: These ideas are my jam. Put me in the middle of nowhere with something dangerous lurking. It’s giving me The Ritual vibes, a movie I loved. Count me in.
[ ] must read [x] curious [ ] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
The 13th Hour
18 votes
Anna Klassen
When a group of teenagers repair an old clock with a mysterious 13th numeral,
they are granted an extra hour where their actions have no consequence.
SS Breakdown: This is the most clever concept on the list so far. Sure, it’s a little mainstream. But it hasn’t been done before, so that negates its mainstreamness. Excecution will be key here but I really want to read this one.
[x] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Bo Knows Infinity
18 votes
Adam Best
Bo Jackson gets stuck in a time loop. Lessons are learned.
SS Breakdown: We officially have our most random concept of the 2024 Black List. But there is precendent for these ideas to get on the list. We had that wild Dennis Rodman script from a couple of years ago. We have time loop tennis script, Court 17. But a script about Bo Jackson? That’s obscure.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [x] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Decoys
18 votes
Jack Waz
When two cocky self-proclaimed CIA badasses learn they’re being used as diversions, they must prove to themselves and the world that they’re capable of being real heroes.
SS Breakdown: Not a terrible idea. A 2024 version of The Other Guys, which was a good movie. But I’m not going to get my expectations up for Decoys. Jack Waz was responsible for one of my most anticipated scripts in 2023, Baby Boom, about gender party reveals, and totally botched the execution. So I’ll go into this one better prepared.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Diana Destroys a Wedding
18 votes
Elizabeth Evans
When her youngest son proposes to a middle-class farmer, New York business icon Diana Ivy incentivizes her dysfunctional children to protect the family name the only way she knows how… by creating a competition: whoever can break up the couple during their luxurious seven-day destination wedding will inherit the Ivys’ Lake Como estate.
SS Breakdown: I will say this. Based on these last few loglines, the Black List seems to be focused more on fun again. Just entertain people. As far as Diana Destroys a Wedding, these concepts are deceptively hard to pull off. War of the Roses seemed like a slam dunk when it was made. But people were put off by the cruelty. This could land in that same bucket. So hopefully all the destroying is fun somehow.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Over Asking
17 votes
Caroline Dries
After a chance encounter with a powerful female litigator, a seemingly perfect couple begin to ask questions about marriage, power, gender, and sex.
SS Breakdown: This logline was DEFINITELY written by someone who’s never written a logline in their life. HOWEVER, the weak logline may also be by design. This is one of the big million dollar specs of 2024. There was a six-studio bidding war. They may be trying to keep the plot under wraps. Word is this harkens back to those 90s romance-thrillers that Michael Douglas always used to star in.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Skin
17 votes
Matisse Haddad
When famed Beverly Hills dermatologist Amelia Williams’ status begins to slip as she ages, she makes a revolutionary discovery that allows her to completely revitalize her appearance and maintain her lifestyle. It just requires a bit of murder every now & then.
SS Breakdown: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I’m still scarred by The Substance! Now I have to watch another one of these????
[ ] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [x] if I have to [ ] won’t read
American Monsters
16 votes
Chris Grillot
A senator and his estranged son must fight to survive when they’re stranded at a hunting ranch where mythical beasts from global folklore are genetically engineered as dangerous game.
SS Breakdown: Chris Grillot was on the list a couple of years ago with a tooth fairy script. It was better than I expected it to be but still not great. With his newest entry, we’re talking HIGH HIGH concept, which gives this one a chance at getting produced.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
The Busboy
16 votes
Elad Ziv
After a mysterious busboy manipulates his way into a job at the most exclusive nightclub in South Beach, he quickly rises through the ranks using ruthless tactics
SS Breakdown: Elad, who wrote tennis loop script Court 17, is back. I know he used to run around the Miami club scene so he’s wisely writing about what he knows.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Fragments
16 Votes
Jake Moses
After a tragic accident, a young nurse finds herself blacklisted and out of work until she’s approached by a detective with a unique job offer–become the caretaker for a murder suspect who may be faking his Alzheimer’s diagnosis
SS Breakdown: This one has some history on the site as it was in an Amateur Showdown. But it got slaughtered by none other than E.C. Henry and his 80s throwback premise, Bubblehead Saves The Day. Does this mean it’s inevitable that E.C. will make a Black List? If so we’d, for sure, lose Jaco, who, no doubt, would fall victim to an immediate heart attack. I’ve also given notes on this script and can’t wait to review it!
[ ] must read [x] curious [ ] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Tony
16 votes
Lou Howe & Todd Bartels
In 1975, a wayward young Anthony Bourdain stumbles into a summer dishwashing job in Provincetown and discovers his life’s calling.
SS Breakdown: I’m not a huge Anothny Bourdain fan but I cocede he would be a good movie character. He’s got that rock’n’roll unpredictable quality that makes him fun to watch. It’s a biopic, which immediately dings it 6000 points. And that means it will be one of the last Black List scripts I read if I get that far. But when it comes to biopics, this is as much as I can personally hope for.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [x] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Fellowship
15 votes
Cassie Keet
A burgeoning artist is offered a once in a lifetime fellowship, luring her into the dark side of New York’s elite art world.
SS Breakdown: I like movies about the art world. And I like these “mentorship” stories where some innocent person is pulled into a dangerous world. The idea is inherent with conflict. Have you heard that before? That conflict word? Yeah, I’m saying it a lot. BECAUSE IT’S SUPER-IMPORTANT TO INFUSE YOUR SCRIPT WITH IT IF YOU WANT TO BECOME A GOOD SCREENWRITER.
[ ] must read [x] curious [ ] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Shutout
15 votes
Alejandro Adams
A talented young pool player from the Bronx navigates the male-dominated world
of pool hustling, guided by a seasoned gambler, as she rises to international fame
and grapples with the moral complexities of the game.
SS Breakdown: Good lord. The pairing phenomenon is back! It never fails to amaze me that this happens. Unique subject matter on the Black List. Then, suspiciously, there’s a second script covering the exact same subject matter. Who knows what’s going on here? Maybe it’s just that we’re in the Matrix.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Stardust Queen
15 votes
Joe Ferran
A prodigiously gifted young assassin attempts to escape the rule of her vicious
step-mother and ascend to fame as a late-90’s pop star.
SS Breakdown: I like characters that have a sharp contast to them. What’s more contrasting than a pop star assassin? Pop music isn’t my favorite subject matter but I did think Smile 2 was pretty good so I’ll check this one out.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Timeshare
15 votes
Mark Townend
In the not-too-distant future, where a new technology allows an individual to project their psyche into the body of another, thus creating a body-sharing gig economy, a financially-struggling married couple accepts a wealthy man’s proposal to use the wife’s body for a single night, but soon that decision causes their relationship and lives to spiral out of control with fatal consequences.
SS Breakdown: I’ve been coming across ideas like this for 20 years. This one does not separate itself in any strong way. I’m not even sure what’s going on (what does projecting your psyche into someone else mean exactly??). These scripts are dependent on a clear set of rules so we always know what’s going on and then a 100% effort on the execution. You get lazy even a little bit with these ideas and your script will fall apart faster than a 3am Chicago hot dog.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Toluca Lake
15 votes
Mark Fleming
When Gavin discovers the girl of his dreams is actually a persistent hallucination caused by a rapidly growing brain tumor, he’s forced to question what’s real, what really matters, and what’s the best way to end things with someone that’s slowly–or not-so-slowly–killing him.
SS Breakdown: The brain tumor element is a little depressing. But falling in love with someone who isn’t real has potential. Mark Fleming is a writer who had a script appear on Scriptshadow – get this – FOURTEEN YEARS AGO. That script was called The Disappearing World and received a “worth the read.”
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
AIDa
14 votes
Alexis Jacknow
A new mother finds the perfect nanny in AI, only to learn that a “perfect” caregiver might be the most dangerous kind of all. This psychological thriller examines the disparity between human nature versus AI nurture and asks the question, could AI ever replace us as parents?
SS Breakdown: When it comes to AI ideas, this is pretty run-of-the-mill. I was thinking we’d get something with way more imagination. But the script isn’t over yet! Maybe one of those is coming…
[ ] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [x] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Turnaround
14 votes
Elyse Hollander
After beloved movie star Tom Adair is found dead, the outpouring of grief and sympathy quickly elevates his best friend Alec Donavan to movie star status. Now Alec must contend with his newfound fame and success–and the fact that he and his agent/girlfriend Karynn Pieper secretly murdered Tom and are haunted by his vengeful ghost.
SS Breakdown: Hollander knocked it out of the park with Madonna biopic, Blonde Ambition, my favorite biopic that I’ve ever read. But the very warts-and-all approach Hollander took to the script is what’s kept it from being made. Madonna has made sure of that. Hollander wrote another script that made the Black List several years ago that was okay. I’m willing to check this one out based on Blonde Amibtion alone.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Crush
13 Votes
Michael Jones
Waking up in a mysterious room, Emily faces a chilling ultimatum: she must decide which of three strangers to sacrifice before her ceiling descends,
crushing her.
SS Breakdown: What I like about this one is that it’s “spec-y.” It’s a high concept contained premise that will move fast. That always gets you points in my book. However, I like as little writer manipulation in the premise as possible. This one feels a bit forced. Whenever someone has to sacrifice someone for no other reason than the script needs it to happen, I don’t like that. But the concept does make me curious.
[ ] must read [x] curious [ ] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Detour
13 votes
Will Widger
When a feuding rap group’s tour bus breaks down in the middle of nowhere, three hip hop superstars find themselves locked in a life-or-death struggle to survive the night as they are hunted by a group of locals with a hidden agenda.
SS Breakdown: I don’t hate it! You’re putting characters who are already inside a conflict-heavy situation into even more conflct. I like setups like that. And we don’t usually see rap stars in this situation. Execution dependent but this could be good!
[ ] must read [x] curious [ ] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Good For Us
13 votes
Alix Lerner
After surviving a terrifying home invasion with her two young children, a woman
leans on her husband for support, but soon suspects that it was not a random incident and that her husband might have somehow been involved.
SS Breakdown: I like ideas like this. You come back from a traumatic experience only to learn that the experience may have been closer to home than you realized. This has potential.
[ ] must read [x] curious [ ] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Howl
13 votes
Madison Vanderberg
All hell breaks loose when a famous–but notoriously troubled–actor announces on a talk show that in less than an hour, he’ll turn into a werewolf…all on live TV.
SS Breakdown: This is giving me Late Night With The Devil vibes, a movie that totally surprised me! But the fact that I can’t tell if this is a serious concept or a comedy concept worries me. If the script is good, I feel like the genre would be naturally clear from the concept.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
King of the Freshman
13 votes
Matt Bailey
During the glittering ascent of Abercrombie & Fitch, a bold CEO and his enigmatic British partner craft an empire of desire, exclusivity, and allure–only to see their legacy unravel as a scandal of exploitation and power threatens to expose the dangerous lengths they went to in their pursuit of perfection.
SS Breakdown: Another business true-story script. Not interested. But that Ambercrombie & Fitch store was always a little weird, what with those books with a bunch of young shirtless boys playing Rugby. Wasn’t there a time when the teenage male greeters at that store were shirtless? Bizarre!
[ ] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [x] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Motherboy
13 votes
Tess Brewer
When a woman becomes trapped in a snowstorm with her overbearing mother-in-law and husband over the Thanksgiving holiday, she begins to suspect that their relationship is not as maternal as it seems. BARBARIAN by way of an erotic, Hallmark holiday movie.
SS Breakdown. The logline is okay. But I have to admit that “BARBARIAN by way of an erotic, Hallmark holiday movie” may be the one-sentence pitch of the year. I’m not even sure what the writer means by that but I wanna know!
[ ] must read [x] curious [ ] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Old Souls
13 votes
Hannah Stoddard & Jenny Ulmer
A trio of sassy, elderly women receive a unique offer from Death for a week of youth in exchange for their lives.
SS Breakdown: Calling Lily Tomlin. Calling Jane Fonda. Calling Betty White. Or the AI version of Betty White. In all seriousness, these ideas are always fun. All I ask of the writer is that they don’t phone in the execution. Dig hard to write strong memorable characters and dig hard to write big funny set pieces.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [x] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Paparazzo
13 votes
Christian Nilsson
Desperate for fast cash to help his ailing mother, an opportunistic outcast partners with a wily paparazzo who entangles them in a homicide involving young celebutantes.
SS Breakdown: Something about this idea feels dated. I’m just not feeling it.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [x] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Road Test
13 votes
Kris Bertin & Naben Ruthnum
A young woman long overdue in getting her driver’s license finally takes her road test, only to find herself receiving direction from a psychotic instructor who wants her dead.
SS Breakdown: Hmmmmm. So the instructor is right next to her and wants her dead? Why not just… kill our hero then? What’s the point of running her through a driving test? Especially if, in trying to cause an accident, he dies too? I’m confused by this logline.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [x] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Bato Bato
12 votes
Donn Kennedy
When his family is murdered and his child kidnapped, a Neanderthal goes on an epic rampage journey to save her from the new dominant species.
SS Breakdown: Did the Black List just take a left turn into an alternate universe?? What is going on right now?? Is this set in the past? In the present? Is it a comedy? Is it a thriller? There may be something to a story where a Neanderthal battles with a human. But this logline is not doing that idea any justice.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [x] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Mommy’s Home
12 votes
James Morosini
A young dad revives his 24-year-old cryogenically frozen mom, unleashing terror and forbidden tension that haunt his family and threaten to unravel his marriage.
SS Breakdown: I’m guessing this is a comedy premise. To that end, it feels dated. Cryogenically frozen people concepts were big 20 years ago. But I’m game for a new take as long as it’s clever. I’m not sure there’s anything clever about this. If anything, it creates more questions than answers. Why was the mom cryogenically frozen? And at the age of 24 no less. There may be some comedy in that a mom, who’s younger than you, is now bossing you around. But the joke feels peripheral. I’m not connecting with this.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [x] if I have to [ ] won’t read
Out There
12 votes
Kate Folk
Fresh off a breakup, Meg is thrilled to meet Roger, who seems like the perfect man: disarmingly handsome, sweet, and obsessed with her. But she’ll soon discover that a disturbing secret lies behind Roger’s perfection, and will have to decide how far she’s willing to go on behalf of true love–even if the person she loves happens to be fake. Based on the short stories “Out There” and “Big Sur” by Kate Folk.
SS Breakdown: A story about a woman who meets a perfect man who may not actually be perfect. Hmmm, where have I heard that idea before? Oh yeah, EVERYWHERE!!!! Unless this writer has an extremely unique voice, this script is going to be really boring.
[ ] must read [ ] curious [ ] decent [ ] if I have to [x] won’t read
Rot
12 Votes
Geo Bradley
Haunted by the death of his hoarder mother, an antisocial man suffering from obsessive compulsions takes work as a trauma cleaner in hopes of facing his past, but the job soon begins to infest and unravel his mental state.
SS Breakdown: I like this one. I like any character study that feels unique and this definitely feels unique. I don’t know what a trauma cleaner is so I’m interested to find out. You’ve got this unique backstory with not just the death of a mother, but death of a mother with a specific disorder. I like the title too. Could be depressing but it feels like something an A-List actor would sign onto to try and win an Oscar.
[ ] must read [x] curious [ ] decent [ ] if I have to [ ] won’t read
The Teller
12 votes
Ben Ripley
A timid, overlooked bank teller with incredible sleight-of-hand dexterity teams up with a rogue FBI agent to rob her own bank.
SS Breakdown: I am all about the writer of my favorite spec script of all time, Source Code. Ben Ripley is back which means I’m checking out his script. But man oh man is this logline weak. Ben needs to hire me for a logline consultation! As do half the people who made this list! These loglines are selling your script short!
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Trapped
12 votes
Jill Blankenship
A woman trapped in a tight cave shaft must fight to escape when the shaft starts
unexpectedly filling up with water.
SS Breakdown: Another too-simple premise. But at least the script’s got GSU. I like trapped premises so I’ll check this out.
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Turpentine
12 votes
Justin Varava
When a deadbeat son hires his friends to rob his own mother and father in order to pay an outstanding debt to a local drug dealer, things don’t go as planned, and family bonds are stretched to their furthest extremes.
SS Breakdown: They already made this movie. It’s called Before The Devil Knows You’re Dead. And it’s a great movie too which approaches the execution in a unique time-jumping way. Hard to imagine this is going to top it. I like the title though.
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The Wrong Side of the Rainbow
12 votes
Dan Woodward
Inspired by the disastrous making of THE WIZARD OF OZ, Maggie Hamilton fights to keep her role as the Wicked Witch, while resisting the forces stifling Judy Garland’s childhood.
SS Breakdown: While we all know I’m not a fan of these types of script, I am fascinated by the production of The Wizard of Oz, one of the weirdest movies ever made. I would watch this if it came out on a free streaming service.
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Boy Girl Fig
11 votes
Kayla Sun
Aden was born with a rare condition where he becomes invisible to those who love him. He struggles when he falls in love with his childhood best friend.
SS Breakdown: Very high concept. But can the premise work? I imagine him being invisible while talking to his childhood best friend. I imagine the best friend not seeing him because he’s invisible. And then I imagine the movie being over. So, what’s the story? Not a good title either.
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Is This You
11 votes
Kaitlin Fontana
Maura and her mother Jeanne have always had a tricky relationship. But when Jeanne starts publishing essays about her troubled daughter’s teenage years, those versions of her appear like hormone-fueled poltergeists hell-bent on ruining the real Maura’s tenuous adult stability.
SS Breakdown: Man, some of these low-vote entries are really bad. This sounds like a subplot in a soap opera. It does not feel big enough to be a movie. I’ve said this before: If your concept could be a subplot in another film, it’s not big enough.
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Little Black Dress
11 votes
Alyson Weaver Nicholas
While on hiatus from filming “Breakfast at Tiffany’s,” international movie star Audrey Hepburn is recruited by the CIA to hunt down a Nazi criminal hiding in Buenos Aires with ties to her past.
SS Breakdown: Not a terrible idea. There is history of actors being recruited into the CIA. It’ll be interesting to see if this is a more traditional execution of the idea or if they’re going to go full camp.
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Mom?
11 votes
Marc Bloom
When a deadly virus infects mothers and turns them against their offspring, a father must do whatever it takes to protect his daughter from her mom.
SS Breakdown: Another high concept idea here. With every high concept idea, people are either going to go out on that limb with you or not. So this script will depend on whether people buy that a virus can only infect mothers and turn them against their offspring. Cause that’s highly specific. But I will always give big ideas a chance. Better than “Is This You” ideas.
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Saturn Return
11 votes
Gaylan Golde
Eve and Anders dated for a decade. Now, Eve is going to see Anders for the first time in years… at his dad’s funeral. Together, they confront their shared past and the infinite nature of love, even after it dies.
SS Breakdown: Tiny ideas like this are so execution-dependent that they’re impossible to judge as a logline. But the problem with ideas this small is that it’s hard to get people to read them. If the script turns out to be good, you have to wonder how many more votes it would’ve gotten if it actually had a premise behind it.
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Spin The Bottle
11 votes
Jeff Feuerstein
Convinced her disastrous dating life stems from breaking the rules of Spin the Bottle two decades ago, Hallie enlists her former crush to track down–and finally kiss–the boy she rejected that night, hoping to lift the curse and find true love.
SS Breakdown: You know, this is a really cute logline. It’s simple but still unique. And it’s a fun way into what, I assume, will be a romantic comedy. This could be a winner.
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Twin Soul
11 votes
Dani Feito
When a psychiatrist and his sickly wife travel to their country cabin for a quiet Thanksgiving weekend, they will have to deal with an unexpected visit from one of his patients, who claims his dead twin brother is after him for revenge. It will quickly become clear things aren’t what they seem.
SS Breakdown: I’m a fan of these plot setups. I like when people are off in some cabin alone and then other people show up. It’s a guilty pleasure of mine. I like the conflict. I like the mystery. A big reason why I liked Leave The World Behind so much.
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Vicky
Allesandra Clark
The incredible true story of Victoria Woodhull’s improbable run to become the
first female President of the United States, 50 years before women even had the
right to vote.
SS Breakdown: This is actually a decent idea for a biopic. The fact that nobody’s heard of this woman AND that she was running for president before women could vote is pretty ironic. And concepts ALWAYS get a boost from me when there’s irony present.
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A Band of Wolves
10 Votes
Reynaldo Leal
After a rival tribe’s raid, an ancient woman must befriend a wolf to survive the brutal wilderness.
SS Breakdown: This one has potential. I love visceral stories that take place a long time ago mainly due to the irony. Usually, when we think of hundreds or thousands of years ago, we think “boring.” But this one looks like it’s going to be packed with conflict. If it’s got urgency (if the rival tribe is tracking her), that’d be even better.
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Bridgehampton
10 votes
Jeremey Leder
Recently dumped Ezra Green accidentally brings a terminally ill woman home to Bridgehampton for a long weekend with his eccentric family. Don’t judge–he needs to cope with his estranged father who just got out of white-collar prison.
SS Breakdown: The old “wacky family” subgenre, complete with a terminally dying subplot? But where’s the meat? Where’s the plot? It’s not terrible but it’s one of those ideas where all the elements seem to be swimming around the center instead of *being* the center.
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Camp David
10 votes
Megan Amram & Joseph Carnegie
In 1981, a young George W. Bush and his siblings are hunted by a masked killer while partying at Camp David.
SS Breakdown: This is a good sign. Cause when I glanced at this logline, I saw Bush and I thought, “Uh oh. A political script.” But then, upon reading the entire logline, I realized that it was a writer having fun with the famous presidential hideaway. So much better than what we were getting 2 years ago, where this would’ve had some super serious angle.
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Intimacy
10 votes
Sam Rubinek
A rising movie star and her struggling playwright husband meet with a pretentious director and a manipulative intimacy coordinator to rehearse a sex scene. Over one chaotic day, power struggles, petty jealousies, and explosive accusations threaten their marriage–and the careers of everyone involved.
SS Breakdown: I feel like I’ve already read this script. There was, at least, a very similar premise that hit the town recently. Anyway, it’s not a bad idea. The whole intimacy coordinator world is quite nuanced and has the potential for danger and conflict within.
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Onboarding
10 votes
Jackson Kellard
When a group of new hires get invited to their company’s corporate retreat, things
quickly take a turn as they discover the only way to land the job is to survive the
weekend. Literally.
SS Breakdown: Another somewhat familiar premise. Maybe a little too much so this time. I feel like I’ve read this script already in several forms. Not a bad idea though.
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Ride or Die
10 votes
Alexander Vargas
A debt-ridden Peloton instructor finds his entire class held hostage by a bomber during one of his live-in-studio classes.
SS Breakdown: I’ve actually given notes on this script. Alex really got the GSU DOWN. And he’s been so dedicated to getting better. Good for him. It’s also a reminder that notes from Carson DO HELP. So make sure to get a consultation with me on your latest screenplay. Don’t you want to make the Black List??
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The Road to Cold Valley
10 votes
Arun Croll
In search of a lost family heirloom, a graduate student and his friends take a road trip to the ruins of the remote Japanese American internment camp where his ancestors were incarcerated during World War II. But after a car breakdown and a series of misunderstandings, the group must fight for their lives as they are stalked across the desert at night by an unhinged, racist mechanic.
SS Breakdown: Another Scriptshadow vet. Arun Croll finished Top 5 in The Last Great Screenwriting Contest. This is his second script on the Black List. And it sounds good! A good old “Deliverance” type narrative.
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Three Hit Men And a Baby
10 votes
David Matalon & Matthew Altman
Three of the world’s top hitmen must take on their most challenging assignment yet–babysitting an infant who holds the key to their survival.
SS Breakdown: I’m not the biggest fan of taking a famous title and changing it in a way that dicatates your entire narrative. It feels too limiting. I would rather you just find a great idea and come up with a title after the fact. I’m just not the audience for this type of script. Unless it’s hilarious, of course.
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Tipsy
10 votes
Barry Galperin & Memo Noriega
A young couple, feeling the pressures of adulthood, is thrown into a supernatural drinking game that tests their commitment, relationship, and more.
SS Breakdown: A what now? Supernatural drinking game?? I’m going to need more information. To the writers’ credit, though, the concept is weird and unique. It’s hard to come up with fresh ideas so props to them.
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True* Mermaid Story
10 votes
Matthew Carnahan
A struggling screenwriter’s life spirals into chaos when he becomes obsessed with telling the true* story of a mermaid’s life and death.
SS Breakdown: I don’t know if I’m getting it. For starters, screenwriters are boring. You shouldn’t build your story around one if possible. And he has to decide whether to tell this mermaid’s story correctly? I’m going to place this one in the Alternat Universe Black List pile. I just don’t understand it.
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Until You
10 votes
Cameron Fay
When a chance encounter thrusts two perpetually single best friends into each other’s lives, they navigate the blurry lines between friendship and love.
SS Breakdown: Scraping the bottle of the barrel here with some of these loglines. So two single people get together and maybe they fall in love? That’s a… story? A story that needs to be turned into a movie?? I don’t know about that.
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Bittersweet Symphony
9 votes
Matthew Kic & Mike Sorce
In the last days of the Britpop era, enigmatic musician Richard Ashcroft’s quest to transform an obscure Rolling Stones cover into the iconic single “Bitter Sweet Symphony” sparks a legal battle that threatens to both destroy his band The Verve and silence the song forever.
SS Breakdown: This just sounds so incredibly boring I can’t muster the strength to write anything more about it.
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Dyersville
9 votes
Will Hettinger
Two Federal Marshals guarding the most important cooperating witness in Chicago’s history– a legendary gangster–are forced to reckon with their own complicated pasts and with the first mole in the history of the Witness Protection Program. Inspired by true events
SS Breakdown: A Netflix movie. It doesn’t sound terrible. A good concept in this one. The word “first” is valuable in concepts. If this were the 2nd ever mole. Or the 5th? It’s not a movie. Making it the first ever makes everything feel bigger.
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Dog
9 votes
Lucy Campbell
Lukas and Sofia’s new life in a small town is shattered when they return home one night to find their dog gruesomely killed–was it a wild animal, a neighbour or a sinister, supernatural force from the valley? Desperate for the truth, Lukas embarks on a witch hunt after evidence points to a young local boy–but as they are plagued by further unexplained, malevolent events, the family unit unravels with devastating consequences.
SS Breakdown: Hmmm… this one intrigues me. It starts out simple then grows into something more interesting and complex. I’m game for Dog, one of the only small-vote entries I’m generally intrigued by.
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Do Not Disturb
9 Votes
Name
When a bumbling pretty-boy criminal screws up a job, he and his scruffy partner decide to lay low at a luxury LA hotel where they cross with a British playwright and a Hollywood starlet. Do Not Disturb is a crime comedy in the vein of GAME NIGHT and IN BRUGES with a little bit of THE WH*TE LOTUS thrown in.
SS Breakdown: I’m not seeing a whole lot here. It’s one of my least-favorite setups in screenwriting – the “Waiting Around” narrative (where the characters wait around). You want characters to be active, not passive. My assessment could change once I get more information. Maybe the characters do have strong goals they’re pursuing while waiting. And you’re always going to pique my interest when you say White Lotus. We’ll see.
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Ex-Cons
9 votes
Michael Montemayor
A former husband-and-wife jewel thief duo, now divorced and in jail, must team up
to help the authorities catch the most elusive thief of all: their son.
SS Breakdown: For jewel-thief concepts, this is okay. It does feel like a 25 year old movie idea though.
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Golden Boy
9 votes
Connor Martin
To save his cash-strapped soccer club, the owner of SSC Napoli stakes his reputation and taxpayers’ dollars on a mercurial, drug-addicted star named Diego Maradona.
SS Breakdown: Diego Maradona is actually the soccer player I know the most about of any soccer player in history and yet I still can’t muster the enthusiasm to read this script due to the fact that it’s A BIOPICCCCC!!!! BOOOOO!!!!
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Grave Expectations
9 votes
Sam Wright
After the recession hits their funeral business hard, a desperate mother is convinced by her manipulative daughter to start a risky side hustle–selling body parts. Based on a true story.
SS Breakdown: Dark. Different. Two things that can get you a lot of cache in this town. But that’s only if the script is good. This one has potential.
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It’s Not You It’s Me
9 votes
Shane Kennedy & Ant Simpson
When Nick and Sophie break up just days before the lavish destination wedding of his best friend and her sister, they vow to keep it a secret until after the nuptials. But what should be a simple white lie becomes a living nightmare when a mystical encounter turns them into the one thing they hate most in the world: each other.
SS Breakdown: BODDDDDDDYYY SWAPPPPPPPP! Yeah. You thought you could get through the Black List without one but you were WRONG baby. I actually have an affinity for the body swap genre but it’s been a while since I’ve read a good one. Put Sydney Sweeny in this and I’ll be there opening day.
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Mildred
9 votes
Josh Corbin
Years after being banished from her family, an aging matriarch returns to the
family business to save her estranged children from a deadly criminal syndicate.
SS Breakdown: I like simple stories. But they need to have SOMETHING that stands out in the concept and this just doesn’t. It’s too simplistic.
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NDA
9 votes
Audrey Ellis Fox
Through a maddening day of mediation for an office harassment claim she filed, the clock is ticking on Dana as she questions the price of her silence, sanity, and the truth.
SS Breakdown: I think this may be the first message script in the whole list. That’s impressive. As for the script itself, I like that it’s a contained time frame. That can take what would normally be small subject matter and give it a dose of gasoline.
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A Payroll To Meet
9 votes
Joseph Sloman
Based on David Whitford’s best-selling book chronicling the true story of college sports’ greatest scandal, a Dallas real estate tycoon spearheads the rise-and-fall of SMU football’s Pony Express.
SS Breakdown: A classic example of the writer assuming that people understand his subject matter as well as he does. We never do. You need to tell us what Pony Express is if you have any shot at getting anyone to read the script.
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Ripe!
9 votes
Tusk
Nothing says “It’s complicated” like breaking your crush’s arm. Set in rural Spain against the backdrop of a passionate soccer rivalry, the story follows young protagonists Sohpie and Gloria as they navigate their relationship.
SS Breakdown: And we have a runaway winner for worst logline of the list. This is embarrassing. I hope to the screenwriting gods that the writer didn’t write this. Oof.
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Thumb
9 votes
Cesar Vitale
When a lonely and socially-stunted young woman mistakenly receives a severed thumb in the mail, she makes it her life’s obsession to return it to the hand it once belonged to–putting her on a collision course that will upend her world forever.
SS Breakdown: A small idea but at least it has a little quirkiness to it. The underrated TV show, Bad Monkey, sets the bar for this type of subject matter.
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Yellow Wallpaper
9 votes
Taylor Streitz
A headstrong woman living in 1975 America descends into madness as she battles postpartum depression, dismissive family, and a gaslighting husband. The mounting oppression and untreated psychosis come together to tell the origin story of a haunted house.
SS Breakdown: If I remember correctly, this story is based on a book. Or a short story. It definitely needs a logline upgrade if you’re going to get anyone to read it. Right now it sounds like it’s trying to get you to jump off a cliff.
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