It uses an age-old tool to keep you invested in every scene, one that not many screenwriters depend on.
Outside of the Mega-Showdown, which is happening at the end of June – so everybody make sure you’re keeping up with your writing cause you’re going to want to have a script for that contest – I consider this month, Scene Showdown, to be the most important showdown of the year.
What: Scene Showdown
Rules: Scene must be 5 pages or less
When: Friday, March 28
Deadline: Thursday, March 27, 10pm Pacific Time
Submit: Script title, Genre, 50 words setting up the scene (optional), pdf of the scene
Where: carsonreeves3@gmail.com
Why?
Because if you can’t write a good scene, you can’t write a good script. All a scene is is a mini-feature screenplay. It’s got its setup, its conflict, its resolution. So you have to be able to master the small-form version of telling a story if you expect to be able to master the long-form version of it (aka a screenplay).
I chose Companion for a scene to feature because I knew it came from the same people who made Barbarian, and Barbarian had some good ass scene-writing in it. So I knew we’d learn something about scene-writing today. And we did!
First of all, this is a really good movie. It will easily make my 2025 Best Movies of the Year list. Unfortunately, it’s a very difficult movie to talk about without spoiling its many surprises. So I would encourage you to watch this movie first then come back to this post. Cause I’m going to spoil a lot.
The movie follows a regular dude named Josh who takes his new girlfriend, Iris, to meet his best friends at a secluded mansion in the wilderness. The friends are Eli, a proudly pudgy dude who’s in a relationship with the gorgeous Patrick. And there’s catwalk modelesque Kat, who’s in a situationship with the owner of the house, 40-something Russian “businessman,” Sergey. A weird group for sure!
Once everyone is situated, Iris goes down to get some sun by the lake and Sergey follows. Sergey starts getting handsy. Then he starts to force himself on her, telling her things like, “This is what you are. Just go with it.” And Iris flips out and cuts Sergey up with a knife, killing him.
When she walks inside, dazed and drenched in blood, everyone flips out. But then Josh says, “Iris go to sleep,” and she shuts down. That’s when we learn that Iris is a companion robot. She’s not real. We also learn that Josh and Kat planned all this. It was a setup so they could steal Sergey’s money.
What’s interesting about this script is that it doesn’t have a lot of traditional dramatic scenes, such as the scene I highlighted Tuesday in “Vanished.” There are a few in the late second act and third act. But many of its better scenes are exposition scenes, which is rare. The reason why is because there are so many reveals in the script. And in order to get to those reveals, we must go through a considerable amount of exposition to understand what’s happened.
For example, when Josh wakes Iris back up, he tells her that she’s a robot, something she didn’t know. She responds by saying that’s not possible because she has all these memories. She even has the memory of when they met. Josh explains why all that is not true, telling her about her programming, even explaining that their introduction was just a “meet cute” option on a computer (she bumped into him at the supermarket produce section and he accidentally sent all the oranges tumbling to the floor).
“Reveal” scenes depend on both the exposition and the reveal itself to be interesting. Nobody wants to sit through information that isn’t fun to listen to. Drew Hanock is a master at making sure everything he’s revealing is fun to listen to.
The closest we get to a traditionally dramatic scene in the first half of the script is when Sergey tries to sexually assault Iris. But I actually thought Hancock sped through that scene too fast. That was a moment where you could really play with the suspense. It wasn’t a bad scene but Albert Hitchcock would not have been impressed.
Instead, many scenes in Companion hinge on the “reveal,” a template where new information emerges—either enlightening and fun to uncover, impactful to the plot, or both.
To be honest, this is more “gimmicky” than writing traditional dramatic scenes because it doesn’t require you to understand dramatic writing. Revealing information can be done in a basic linear manner and, therefore, is easy to pull off.
However, the art of the reveal is in how and when the reveals are layered into the story. Because you can reveal something in a boring way or you can reveal something in a clever way. And if you’re weaving all these reveals in in a way that tells me you’ve thought endlessly about your plot, that’s just as difficult as writing a traditionally dramatic scene.
I’ll give you an example (spoilers).
The original plan to use Iris to kill Sergey was thought up by Josh and Kat. Eli and Patrick knew nothing about it. That way, Josh and Kat get all of Sergey’s money. But since the killing, Iris has escaped from the house, forcing Josh and Kat to bring Eli and Patrick in on what they did.
It’s, again, an exposition scene. Because we’re going over what Kat and Josh planned, why they planned it, etc. Also, there’s plot-related exposition. We get the plot advancement of Josh offering Eli a third of the cut if he helps them capture Iris.
Eli looks at him and says, “You mean a fourth of the cut,” motioning to Patrick. “Are you crazy, no way. A third of the cut,” Josh says. Eli argues back that if he’s coming in, it will be a four way split. As that argument heats up, Eli turns to Patrick and says, “Patrick, go to sleep,” and Patrick goes into sleep mode.
That’s our reveal. It turns out Patrick is a companion robot as well.
Do you see how writer Drew Hancock did that? Most writers would’ve brought that reveal out in a less dramatic way. Maybe late at night when Eli and Patrick are in bed and Patrick is annoying him, wanting to talk, Eli then says, “Patrick go to sleep,” and we get our reveal there.
But it’s a way less dramatic version of the reveal. And that’s how you know you’re a good “reveal” scene writer. You’re dishing out these reveals during intense plot moments – in this case, when discussing the percentage split of 12 million dollars. The whole reason Eli fought Josh on the split was not because he wanted it split four ways, but because he was terrified that his robot would find out that he was a robot (since Josh was treating him as one, not bringing him in on the cut).
So the lesson here is that I’d rather you become great at traditionally dramatic scene-writing. It’s a way more valuable skill. But if you’re writing a script where you’re keeping a lot of information from the reader, you can definitely write a strong screenplay with “reveal” scene-writing.
Companion also reminded me that screenplays are very context-heavy. Scenes don’t live off on their own islands. If you can write a scene that requires zero story context, it probably isn’t the best scene for your movie. A good scene should always be pulling in earlier setups from your script, which is why, in Scene Showdown, I give you the option to set your scene up (the only time you shouldn’t need this is if you enter the first scene of your script).
Still, Companion is one of those rare screenplays where literally no scene works without the knowledge of all the other scenes. That’s something we’re SUPPOSED to do in every script we write. But we never completely do it. And this script did. Impressive!
Ironically, it’s the reason why it bombed at the box office. There’s just no way to sell this movie without massively spoiling its awesomeness. However, I have no doubt that Companion will make a killing in digital rentals and when it’s later released on Netflix. It will for sure become a cult classic and it deserves it!
