In the vein of Dude, Where’s My Car and Pineapple Express, we get… like, uhhh, whoa mannn, what is this review about again? Oh yeah! Huh huh huh. The Aliens Are Stealing Our Weed!
Genre: Comedy
Premise: When two best friend pot-farmers wake up one day to find their entire crop of weed gone, they quickly come to realize it was the work of aliens.
About: Today’s script comes from Ryan Firpo, half the writing team for the upcoming Marvel flick, The Eternals (the other half is Ryan’s brother, Kaz). Ryan wrote and directed a short film called, Ten Years, in 2016, about a 10 year marriage reunion in Vegas that doesn’t go as planned. The short generated a lot of buzz, leading to Kevin Feige seeing it and hiring Ryan and his brother to write Eternals. The Firpos used that buzz to finish in the top spot for the 2017 Black List with their script, Ruin, which I reviewed here. Gina Rodriquez and Paramount are teaming up for “Aliens.”
Writer: Ryan Firpo
Details: 420 pages (just kidding – 111 pages)
Readability: Mostly fast
Sources on this one say it was picked up because Paramount thought it fell in line with other Paramount comedies like “Anchorman,” “Airplane!” and “Blazing Saddles.” Absurdist wild comedy has not generally done well here on Scriptshadow. But you guys know I like me some aliens. So maybe aliens stealing weed is going to change all that!
20-something best friends Candice and Izzy are living out in the middle of Nowhere, Washington, growing weed, buuuddddyyyy. Candice is like the weed-growing version of Walter White. She’s an Ivy League biologist drop-out who’s using computers to create the perfect strain of weed, what she calls, “Candizzy Chronic.”
Candice and Izzy share their ten acres of land with Cheech and Chong. I mean, the characters’ names are Bob and Jerry. But make no mistake, they will be played by Cheech and Chong. Or whoever the names of the actors who play Cheech and Chong are. Bob and Jerry always come by and, like, steal their weed. But it’s all good. They’re harmless. And at least they provide feedback on the strain, which they think is righteous, brother.
Once the crop is completed, weed buyer Reggie Sanchez shows up to test it. It takes him less than two seconds to declare Candizzy Chronic the best strain of weed he’s ever smoked, yo. He wants to buy the entire crop. Yeah baby! After years of raking dirt, Candice and Izzy are about to rake in the cash.
Except that the very next day, the weed is gone! Candice and Izzy charge over to confront their primary suspects, Bob and Jerry. But the clueless morons say all their weed has been stolen too! The rookie investigators realize that Reggie Sanchez must have done it, and they know where he’s going – Cannacon in Seattle. So off they go!
They find Reggie there, secretly follow him to his room, and then watch as he takes his human skin off to reveal that he’s an alien! WTF!!! Freaked out, Izzy says they HAVE to go to the FBI. “Do you know what they’ll think of us if we tell them an alien stole our weed?” Candice counters. You’re right, Izzy says. We have to go to the one person in the government we know, DEA Agent Mike. Who happens to be Candice’s ex-fiance!!!
Mike thinks this is obviously a made up story stemming from smoking too much Mary Jane. But after the girls beg him to help, he reluctantly comes back with them to their stolen crop. While Mike’s investigating, he looks up to see…. A flying afro??? Yes, it’s a flying afro. The group chases the afro, finally catches it, and figures out it’s some sort of drone that scouts land for good marijuana.
They allow the drone to lead them back to the alien mothership, where Frank, a 100 million year old alien, explains that in order to save humanity from killing each other, they’re going to drop the world’s weed supply into all the volcanos and hot box earth for the next 200 years to chill everyone out. Will Candice, Izzy, Bob, Jerry, and Mike go along with their plan? Or will they stop the aliens???
I still think that the best jokes come from conflict.
When there’s no conflict, the characters are just riffing, pushing out try-hard jokes, and while some hilarious writers are able to make this work, it’s often eye-rolling stuff.
You need legitimate conflict for laughs.
That’s why Pineapple Express was so successful. It wasn’t two best friends running around making pot jokes. It was a normal guy and his drug dealer. They lived completely different lives and had completely different life experiences, which is what created the conflict.
Where that really helps you out in a script is when your pairing encounters a high-stakes choice, one where if they make the wrong decision, there’ll be dire consequences. That’s when two people with diametrically opposing views on life pays off. Because they’re going to have two completely different solutions, and that’s going to result in a lot of laughs.
Candice and Izzy are best friends. There’s zero conflict there. Like none. And so they basically just agree with each other the entire movie. And, sure, there are some funny exchanges. But I’m telling you, it’s really hard to keep the joke quality high when the conflict is nonexistent.
That’s why I loved the choice to bring Mike in, the ex-fiance. He contributes some legitimate conflict to the dynamic. There’s a lot of unfinished business between him and Candice, which creates a lot of subtext. Candice had a normal life and an amazing future and ran off to start a pot farm. Mike can’t understand that choice. And he carries that grudge into every conversation.
But even then, Firpo ends up mining that conflict more for drama than comedy. I would’ve liked it if, for example, Izzy saw Mike as a threat to her current friendship with Candice. If he wins her back over, she could leave Izzy. So you’d have the two sort of fighting over Candice in a way. Or you could’ve had Mike be an asshole who had dumped Candice. And Izzy is now super-protective over Candice. You could’ve gotten a lot of humor out of her being an asshole to Mike.
To Firpo’s credit, he does go deeper than most comedy writers on the character front. He attempts to create this whole backstory where Candice had this Ivy League education and perfect future and the husband of her dreams, but she ran away from it all. She’d always used weed during the relationship to escape her feelings. Now she used weed, in the form of a career, to escape a future with Mike. So she’s used weed to avoid everything in her life and her journey is about facing up to that issue.
But even then, it doesn’t really matter, because a comedy script is nothing if it’s not funny. And this didn’t have any five-star knee-slappers. In fairness, Firpo is targeting a younger demo. Paintball shots to the balls and flying afros are probably going to be funnier to your average coed. Only had a few chuckles myself, though. So I wouldn’t recommend this.
[ ] What the hell did I just read?
[x] wasn’t for me
[ ] worth the read
[ ] impressive
[ ] genius
What I learned: There are exceptions to this rule, of course (Dumb and Dumber comes to mind), but you generally have two choices when you create a pairing for a comedy. Either make them two people who do not like each other and don’t want to be together (The Other Guys) or two people with diametrically opposing views of how to live life (a staunch conservative and knee-jerk liberal, for example). If you pair up two best friends who generally see the world the same way, you’re leaving a lot of laughs on the table.
