Pass me the whip! I give this note to writers all the time in consultations, because very few amateurs know how important it is. YOUR OPENING SCENE HAS TO BE AWESOME. The opening scene is the scene readers use to decide a) if they’re going to like you as a writer, b) if your writing […]
Genre: Comedy-Horror Logline: In a city where dangerous monsters emerge from underground every night, a monster-fighting patrol team is tasked with finding and killing them before they can kill the city’s citizens. About: Ben Wheatley is coming and he’s coming hard. One of the most buzzed about upcoming films that doesn’t have “Star” or “Bat” […]
Genre: TV Pilot – Drama Logline: The show follows a troubled couple involved in the disturbing depths of the Los Angeles psychic community. About: Last night Hulu debuted their Stephen King adaptation, 11-22-63, and if you think it was just another Hulu original, think again. When you get a Stephen King book produced by JJ […]
Genre: Action/Superhero Premise: Immediately after meeting the love of his life, a merc receives a terminal cancer diagnosis. After being turned into a freak by a fake experimental cure, he declares revenge on the man who made him this way. About: Everyone knows the story by now. Rhett Reese, Paul Wernick, Ryan Reynolds, and director […]
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