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It is that time of year. A time of joy. A time of hope. A time of roasting second-rate loglines. Oh, I kid. We all know, at this point, that managers who have never written a logline in their lives are responsible for the majority of the loglines we see on the Black List. My job is, simply, to cut through the muck and assess the concepts here on my annual “Assess the Black List” post.
The first thing I noticed was that they must have changed the voting system. 49 votes, if not the most votes ever for a top script, is close. It’s been a while since the top script has gotten more than 30 votes. So maybe Franklin is sending out more ballots. A see a few familiar names here – names that have been seen on the Scriptshadow site. Let’s take a look as we break down, one by one, every logline on the 2023 Black List.
Bad Boy
49 votes
Travis Braun
A rescue dog suspects his loving new owner is a serial killer.
SS Breakdown: It’s appropriate that this script finished number one because it dates back to a long line of high-ranking Black List scripts that celebrate animals in a major way. Bubbles. The Voices. The Beaver. It’ll be interesting if the writer tells the story completely from the dog’s point of view. As long as it’s nothing like that movie, Strays. Logline needs more context to fully critique but, at the very least, sounds interesting.
[ ] must read
[x] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Stakehorse
47 votes
Justin Piasecki
A racetrack veterinarian who runs an off-the-books ER for criminals finds his practice and life in jeopardy when he’s recruited for his patient’s heist.
SS Breakdown: This was the biggest spec sale of the year, if I remember correctly, pulling in a solid 1 million buckaroos. I’ve already read and reviewed the script, which I thought was solid. I just remember it had a really fun train set piece that I hadn’t seen before. Definitely worthy of being a top 10 Black List script but the field is going to be weak if this is really number 2.
Spoiler
Jordan Rosenbloom
42 votes
After passing on a hot new screenplay, a studio executive finds himself trapped as the protagonist inside the film and must regain control before the credits roll.
SS Breakdown: We usually get one or two of these industry meta scripts a year. Most writers stop pushing themselves after they put the period after their logline. What gives me a little hope with this one is that the writer has added some irony. It isn’t the writer who’s trapped in his own script. It’s the studio exec who passed. There’s some irony there, as well as some potential to screw around the protagonist. How well *does* he know screenwriting? How closely did he pay attention to the script? If he had, he’d know how to survive. But because he didn’t, he repeatedly pays the price. Could be fun.
[ ] must read
[x] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Head Games
Colin Liddle
25 votes
A corporate spy poses as a personal chef to the disgraced founder of a neuroprosthetics firm in order to steal his seismic-shifting new invention from his secluded villa in Greece.
SS Breakdown: An unnaturally large drop in vote differential between the number 3 and 4 scripts on the list. I’m not a fan of any logline that forces you to use a dictionary to understand it. I have no idea what neuroprosthetics is. Neither does my spell-check. So that’s not a great sign. But because I care about you guys, I looked it up. It basically is a way to improve motor-skills. There are a bit too many competing components to this logline. Not saying it means the script is bad. I’m just unclear on what this movie actually is.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Didier
24 votes
Jackson Kellard
The inspiring true story of international soccer icon Didier Drogba and his efforts to end a bloody civil war in his home country of Ivory Coast; not just with the skill of his feet, but also the power of his voice.
SS Breakdown: There may not be a worse Scriptshadow way to start a logline than, “The inspiring true story of…” It means we’re about to read a biopic logline, aka, the most uninspired loglines in the business. This one just sounds way too serious. It is the definition of a script I have no interest in reading. With that said, I get more caught up in these scripts than I think I will. So who knows? Maybe it’s good.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
High Concept
21 votes
Alex Kavutskiy & Ryan Perez
In the early 2000s, two totally opposite best friends, Mike (an uptight lawyer) and BJ (a stoner slacker), awake one morning to find that they have swapped bodies, are stuck in a time loop, and are afflicted with many other high-concept comedy premises of that era. Drawing upon their knowledge of those type of movies, Mike & BJ must learn their lesson(s) and get their lives back to normal.
SS Breakdown: This is in the running for most clever logline on the list. High concepts can be silly so why not make fun of them? With that said, I get antsy with any comedy script that features a stoner. Stoners are typically the first choice the writer comes up with. They’re so one-dimensional and the characters are so one-note, that they can be terrible choices for the script. But I love a swapped bodies time loop script. I think that’s a hilarious premise. And it’s always good to have two writers on these big comedy scripts because you need checks and balances for the jokes.
[x] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Patsy
21 votes
Filipe Coutinho
The untold and unfiltered true story of legendary country singer Patsy Cline, from her humble beginnings in Virginia to her untimely death at the height of her fame.
SS Breakdown: There are many unfiltered things I want to say about this entry but I challenged myself to say something nice. So here’s what I’ll say. SMART WRITER. I don’t care who Patsy Cline is. You don’t care who Patsy Cline is. Nobody cares who Patsy Cline is. EXCEPT one entity. The Black List. The Black List cares about every musical artist biopic that is written. The writer knew that and they took advantage of it to get on the list. Good for them.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[x] won’t read
Forbidden Fruits
20 votes
Meredith Alloway & Lily Houghton
Free People employee Apple secretly runs a witchy femme cult in the basement of the mall store after hours with fellow fruits Cherry and Fig. But when new hire Pumpkin challenges their ‘girl boss’ ways, the women are forced to face their own poisons or succumb to a bloody fate. Based on Lily Houghton’s stage play: Of The Woman Came The Beginning Of Sin And Through Her We All Die.
SS Breakdown: Did I just have a stroke? I would like to pretend like I understand this entry but, after reading it five times, I’m more confused than I was the first time I read it. It’s either about fruits that are women or women who are fruits. That much I understand. On the plus side, it’s original. And it’s not a biopic. So those are two major thumbs up from me.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Return to Sender
20 votes
Russell Goldman
When a woman experiences delivery scams that grow increasingly personal and strange, she becomes hellbent on discovering her anonymous sender.
SS Breakdown: This logline feels incomplete. I’m not sure what a “delivery scam” entails. She gets sent the wrong package? Or is this an e-mail thing? Feels like the writer needed to get in there and re-write this logline before it went out to thousands of people.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
First You Hear Them
19 votes
Sean Harrigan
A group of twenty-somethings try the ‘perfect drug’ for the first time. It’s only when they come down from the euphoric high that the hauntings begin: First you hear them. Then you see them. Then they come for you.
SS Breakdown: Okay, we’ve got a fun little horror premise here. It’s a bit simplistic but most horror films are. Talk to Me entailed clutching a hand and seeing dead people. Very simplistic and it did well. It’s nice when an idea truly comes up with something new but that’s elusive.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Foragers
19 votes
Sam Boyer
When the illegitimate daughter of a Portland billionaire goes missing, her loved ones turn to Juno and Andi, local homesteaders and members of The Foragers–a grassroots network of experts dedicated to finding the lost and bringing them home.
SS Breakdown: I like the online network sleuths who use the power of social media to solve cold cases. But this doesn’t sound like that. This sounds like a totally made-up thing. I’m not sure what “grassroots network of experts” means exactly. That’s something to keep in mind when you’re writing loglines. It doesn’t matter if it makes sense to you. It only matters if it makes sense to others. On the plus side, this feels a *little bit* different than your typical “missing person” script. So that’s good.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Carousel
18 votes
Rachel Lambert
A family doctor in East Cleveland juggles his personal life, as he reconnects with an old flame, deals with his teenage daughter’s problems, and selling his family’s medical practice.
SS Breakdown: When you hear the annoying assessment that your logline is, “execution dependent,” this is exactly what they’re talking about. Nobody reads this logline and thinks, “Man, I have to read this RIGHT AWAY.” It doesn’t have a single hook within it. But, if it’s an authentic compelling character study, it could be great. This is just a really tough logline to send out there as an aspiring screenwriter. I’m guessing CAA blasted this out there with the assurance that the script was good. If you don’t have CAA in your back pocket, you need to write a flashier concept.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Hot Mess
18 votes
Shanrah Wakefield
Sandy was once a formidable investigative reporter until a bungled story destroyed her credibility and forced her into the soul-sucking world of tabloid gossip–now her days are spent covering hot mess celebrity Margot Ford. When a disillusioned Sandy is called to Fiji to follow Margot’s latest hijinks, she discovers a surprise about Margot’s real identity, which sends her on an adventure she never imagined, as the two must team up to take down a massive, sinister corporate plot with global implications, all taking place at a luxury island resort.
SS Breakdown: Poor choice of title here. “Hot Mess” is a dated term. You’d prefer to use more recent terms and phrases for your title. The script sounds okay. The Black List seems to like these stories where the protagonist is pursuing a celebrity in some way. It’s hard to tell if this is a comedy or a black comedy, which is why I wish The Black List included genres.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Hit Me, Baby
17 votes
Kurt McLeod
After Liv, a world-class hitwoman, breaks up with her boyfriend, Martin, he puts out a massive contract on his own life to get her attention. What Martin doesn’t realize is that it’s an open contract with a 48-hour expiration, so now every assassin in the western hemisphere is coming after him. Liv makes a deal to keep him safe until the contract expires, if he pays her out the full bounty. With the clock ticking, the two must eludes some of the world’s most prolific killers
SS Breakdown: Oh boy. This has way too many rules. Is way too confusing. The motivations are hard to understand unless you concentrate really hard. I’m not sure it makes sense. Putting a contact on your life to get someone to notice you. What??? I don’t get it.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Polo
17 votes
Nika Burnett
When a young woman returns home from the Navy, she joins a local water polo team and finds herself fighting a new battle.
SS Breakdown: What stuck out to me here was that the writer is repped by Rain, who seems to have a ton of scripts on the Black List. I don’t know much about them. Are they new? I have to say, this sounds like it may be up my alley. There’s something random about joining a local water polo team. Who joins water polo teams? But it also seems like the perfect subject matter to create a black comedy out of. I’m curious about this one.
[ ] must read
[x] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
The Nest
17 votes
Aaron Benjamin
Confined to “the nest,” a Secret Service Sniper gets a strange call on the radio from a deranged mastermind who’s holding his family hostage in a box suite during America’s biggest game– The Super Bowl.
SS Breakdown: It’s definitely a high concept idea. I would’ve liked if the writer (or manager) clarified what “The Nest” is. I don’t know what it is and many other people won’t know either. You have to remember that as a screenwriter writing a logline – we don’t know unless you tell us. Things that are obvious to you may not be obvious to us. Personally, this feels like one of those “almost there” ideas. It’s missing that strange attractor.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
We Got Next
Aaron Goldberg, Alex Goldberg, & Michael Goldberg
The true story of how one daring executive beat the odds to launch the longest-running league in women’s sports: the WNBA.
SS Breakdown: If you’re into subject matter like this, you know who you should do a biopic on? The guy who invented The Tennis Channel, Steve Bellamy, who used to be my boss. In order to raise money, Bellamy used Google, which was less than a year old at the time, to google the richest people in the world. And then he just cold-called every single one of them until he raised all the money he needed. He didn’t know any of them. Crazy! I’m probably not going to watch any movie about the WNBA but I do think the writers were smart in recognizing that this is the ultimate Black List catnip.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[x] won’t read
10/24/02
Connor McKnight
On one rainy night in October, a man checks into the Mooncrest Motel. He never leaves. A real time, single-location thriller in the aftermath of a heist at Area 51.
SS Breakdown: Speaking of catnip, you are not going to put “Area 51” in your logline and not get me at least a little bit interested. I’m not sure you need to put the specific motel name in the logline. I’m not sure what that achieves. But I do like a heist that happens at Area 51. That allows for some high concept tomfoolery.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
The Profit
16 votes
Andrew Ferguson
The astonishing true story of how an unknown, evangelical Christian immigrant, Bill Hwang, suffered the greatest loss of wealth in American history, gambling away his $35 billion fortune and jeopardizing the entire financial system in under forty eight hours.
SS Breakdown: We’ve got our first seasoned Scriptshadow reader in the mix, with Andrew. Awesome to see him make the coveted list. High stakes money-centric true stories are hot right now and this sounds like a good one. I’m curious about what “gambled away” means, though. Does that mean literally gambling? Like in Vegas? Or just gambled on some bad investments? Cause losing 35 billion on craps would be the ultimate movie ever.
[ ] must read
[x] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Better Half
15 votes
Gaelyn Golde
A codependent woman unravels when her best friend gets a boyfriend.
SS Breakdown: Extremely simple premise. Probably too simple. But the writer accurately portrays where the central conflict is going to come from so that we can imagine in the movie. “Codpenednet” is your central conflict. To understand why, imagine the logline without that word. It doesn’t read as powerfully. I’m worried this one might not have legs. But it’s one of the scripts so far that’s on my radar.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Fistmas
14 votes
Jack Waz
In order to propose to the girl of his dreams, a lovestruck guy must first survive her hometown’s annual Christmas fighting tournament.
SS Breakdown: I need my logline to give me something I understand. I’ve never heard of a “Christmas fighting tournament” before. So how am I going to invest in something that I didn’t even know existed until two minutes ago? With loglines like this, a little hand-holding is helpful. Just tell us what the tournament is. What it entails. Yeah, it will make the logline longer but clarity is more important than brevity.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Love and War and Guernica
14 votes
Sam Zvibelman
Against the backdrop of a present-day, war-torn, America, Love and War and Guernica is a dark comedy about Neil Mudd, a reporter for the Union who is suffering from writer’s block ever since his break-up, and his engaging with a mysterious horse following him through war torn Los Feliz, California. When the Union recruits Neil for a top secret mission, he and the horse go on an epic journey that, emotionally, serves as a metaphor for the war going on inside Neil’s heart.
SS Breakdown: Yikes. Okay, there’s a lot here. I like the concept of a modern day Civil War. There are obviously some The Man Who Killed Don Quixote inspirations at play. It just doesn’t sound, from this synopsis, like there’s much focus in the story. It sounds interesting but when I read this, I can’t quite imagine the movie and you need the reader to be able to see the movie in their head when they read your logline.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
The Getaway
14 votes
Mario Kyprianou & Becky Leigh
A couple on the brink of divorce sets off on a romantic getaway to save their marriage, but when they find that they have inexplicably traveled back in time, they decide to team up to stop their younger selves from ever getting married.
SS Breakdown: I’m a sucker for almost any idea that involves time travel. This one sounds like that George Clooney Julia Roberts movie that came out recently, except for more clever, as instead of parents trying to stop their kids from marrying, the actual couple is trying to stop themselves from marrying. That has potential.
[ ] must read
[x] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Runner
13 votes
Tommy White & Miles Hubley
High end courier, Hank Malone, has three hours to transport a liver from LAX to a Santa Barbara hospital for immediate transplant surgery. The recipient? A dying seven-year-old girl with the rarest blood type on the planet. If only the head of the Southland’s most dangerous crime syndicate didn’t need the organ too.
SS Breakdown: Okay! I hear you Tommy and Miles. This one’s got goals, stakes, and urgency up the wazoo. Old school spec energy. Plus you’ve got a great antagonist. The conflict and obstacles are going to be off the charts. This is one of the few concepts on the list so far that sounds like a real movie – something that’s going to get made.
[ ] must read
[x] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
The Masque of the Red Death
13 votes
Charlie Polinger
A grotesquely hilarious dark comedy based on Edgar Allen Poe’s short story “The Masque of the Red Death.”
SS Breakdown: I will leave this to a certain Scriptshadow commenter to assess. I don’t know anything about this short story. But you’re probably in good hands basing a story on one of the most popular literary figures in history. I just wish they’d tell us what the story was about instead of giving us the title.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Toxoplasmosis
13 votes
Andrew Nunnelly
The classic story of boy meets girl, boy loses girl… boy forms unexpected bromance with girl’s cat, who may actually be an intergalactic emissary sent to save humanity from itself.
SS Breakdown: I think cats are hilarious. I like this idea a lot actually. My only worry is that it’s a reminder of The Marvels. For those who don’t know, one of the characters on The Marvels is a cat, a cat that sounds similar to this cat. In spite of that, this one could be a sleeper.
[ ] must read
[x] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
U.P.S.E.T.
13 votes
Ben Bolea
Two border cops in Michigan’s Upper Peninsula find themselves in the crosshairs of Canadian biker gangs, international drug cartels, and shady government agents after intercepting a drug deal gone bad–all the day after an awkward one-night stand.
SS Breakdown: I recognize Ben’s name as someone who read the blog from the beginning! So props to another unofficial Scriptshadow graduate. This one really would’ve benefited up front from a “Comedy” tag because the first part of the logline could be a serious movie. It sounds like it could be a fun movie. But Ben, come and get a logline consult. I’ll make this thing 100 times better. :)
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Untitled Missing Child
13 votes
Brenna Galvin
A mom-fluencer’s life unravels when her child goes missing and an unexpected discovery mires the investigation in a battle of perception. With buried secrets exposed, our mom is forced to take matters into her own hands, turning a simple missing person’s case into a story with twists that even the internet wouldn’t believe.
SS Breakdown: I like a great timeless concept. But, in order to stand out, it’s good to write a concept that couldn’t have been written ten years ago. That gives your idea that “fresh” angle that everyone is looking for. An ‘mom-fluencers’ are just so weird that I can’t imagine this won’t at least be interesting.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Dickens vs. Andersen
12 votes
Henry Oscar Thaler
Clumsy, awkward Hans Christian Andersen invites himself over to the country home of his idol, Charles Dickens… and overstays his welcome.
SS Breakdown: This almost feels like one of those Black List parody concepts. “You want to get on the Black List? Just write about Charles Dickens warring with another writer.” Also, Andersen isn’t nearly as well-known as Dickens so the logline is going to fall on deaf ears for some. This is going to need a lights-out execution to make up for that. It just doesn’t feel like a serious script to me.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Our House
12 votes
Will Youmans
When she wins an essay competition, Leila Moseley is brought to Capitol Hill to be honored by the United States Congress, but her luck runs out when the ceremony intersects with a violent insurrection, and she must team up with a group of aides, interns, and nepo babies to battle for survival against a legion of protesters and a secret society.
SS Breakdown: I read this title a little too quickly and initially thought it was called “Out House.” Please, I am begging the Scriptshadow faithful, for someone to write “Out House.” At the very least, write a logline. Personally, I read scripts and watch movies to escape all the negativity in the world. Even if something is dark, I’ll enjoy it if it’s entertaining. I don’t want to be reminded about politics. We’re inundated with that stuff so much. I don’t need more of it in my reading. With that said, the Black List looooooooves politics. Especially if it’s progressive. So we’ve got another smart writer here exploiting the system. And, to Will’s credit, it seems like it’s taking a comedic direction.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[x] won’t read
Our Man In Miami
12 votes
Ozzy Inguanzo
A Miami construction contractor transforms into a notorious sports agent when he hatches a high- stakes scheme to steal Fidel Castro’s most prized assets–Cuban baseball players–for the New York Yankees. Based on the wild true story.
SS Breakdown: If you’re going to do sports true stories, look for the more offbeat ones. Not the obvious ones. This feels offbeat. It feels different and compelling. Also, chalk another one up for the rising stock of the sports biopic.
[ ] must read
[x] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
The Great Pretender
12 votes
Kirill Baru & Eric Zimmerman
When Tom Hanks, the nicest guy in Hollywood (and someone who looks a lot like him), gets kidnapped, his doppelgänger must step in to save him. In a world of make-believe, it’s hard to know who to trust.
(Edit) Writer e-mailed. Here’s his real logline: When Tom Hanks, the nicest guy in Hollywood (and arguably the World), finds his life stolen by a Tom Hanks impersonator, the only way to get it back is to do the one thing he’s never been able to: stop being nice.
SS Breakdown: Has anyone listened to the Dead Eyes podcast? It’s one of the craziest podcasts you’ll ever listen to. This actor had his dream destroyed when Tom Hanks vetoed him for a roll in Band of Brothers because he looked like he had “dead eyes.” This is something Hanks told to someone who told to someone else and it got back to the actor. So the actor made this entire podcast about Tom Hanks, his hero, destroying him. And, in the third season, he gets to interview Tom Hanks. This is a long-winded way of me saying, there’s potential in this idea but I’m not seeing enough of that in the logline. For example, what if the doppelgänger was actually the cruelest person on the planet? And he had to take the place of the nicest person on the planet. There’s a lot of comedy potential there.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
The Peasant
12 votes
Will Dunn
In the 14th Century, a lone shepherd rages against a company of mercenary knights after they ransack his peaceful peasant community, proving that he is more than he seems.
SS Breakdown: I can tell when a logline was not written by the writer. And this is that. Cause the last part of the logline completely falls off a cliff. It’s too general. We need specificity in loglines. Tell us what he does. Not an approximation of what he does. Cause this could be good but it’s hard to tell with this botched logline.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
The Pentester
12 votes
Jesse Quiñones
When a pentester with a perfect track record for breaching his clients’ security systems takes an unusually high-paying job, his success proves to be in vain as he finds himself in the middle of a deadly conspiracy where the only way out is forward.
SS Breakdown: A script about a pen tester? That’s an ink-redible idea. Ohhhhh! A “pentester.” Pentester. Gotcha. Wait, what the heck is a pentester? Okay, just looked it up: “A penetration test, colloquially known as a pentest or ethical hacking.” This one doesn’t get my toes wiggling. Any tech idea that could’ve been written 20 years ago is probably not the best script to write. Unless you’re doing something fresh and new that’s not evident in the logline.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Backcountry
11 votes
Kevin Sheridan
Once the future of extreme skiing, Brooks Provence is approached to ski the mountain that nearly ended his life two decades ago–this time alongside a young skier on the brink of stardom. But when disaster falls, Brooks must overcome his past and accomplish the impossible in order to save the lives of those he loves most.
SS Breakdown: I just reviewed one of Kevin’s scripts not too long ago. It was very good. I like the subject matter of “extreme skiing.” Sounds more exotic than “skiing.” These things matter in a logline. You must look for ways – any ways at all – to differentiate your idea from the competition. Since I liked Colors of Authority I’ll definitely check this one out.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Blood Rush
11 votes
Andrew Ferguson
In response to a mysterious rise in Miami gang violence, a meticulous FBI agent gets recruited by a covert operations unit, only to discover the enemy they are fighting may not be human.
SS Breakdown: Ferguson with his second script on the list. He’s got my attention with this one. I would like some clarity, however, on what “not human” means. It could be monsters. It could be aliens. Whichever one it is will increase or decrease my excitement for this script.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Last Resort
11 votes
Laura Stoltz
When a grieving woman takes a trip to a posh, Icelandic resort designed to assist its guests with ending their lives, she meets people who finally force her to accept the things she cannot explain.
SS Breakdown: Suicide scripts are a slippery slope. They’re hard characters to get audiences on board with cause they’re so depressing and their goal is such a sad one. But I like the Icelandic resort development. That tells me there could be some exotic creative choices somewhere down the line.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Sea Dogs
11 votes
Josh Woolf
After two down-on-their-luck lobster fishermen botch a hijacking attempt on the high seas, they are forced to confront the consequences of their actions as they struggle to navigate a world they no longer recognize.
SS Breakdown: Another strong beginning to the logline. I like the specificity of “lobster fisherman.” When I say “I like the specificity” of that, what I mean is, I don’t read a lot of scripts about lobster fishermen. It’s a new world with new rules I get to learn and experience. Readers enjoy that. They don’t enjoy the same thing over and over again. They want new. But the second half of the logline doesn’t even make sense. Did Chat GPT write this? By the way, where are all the AI concepts? You’d think writers would be all over that. ZERO representation on this one, by the way. Which raises my interest a notch (it’s much harder to get votes as an unrepped writer since no one is pushing your script around town. Therefore, it is more likely that the script is good, since it is being passed around organically).
[ ] must read
[x] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
The Crowd
11 votes
Jack Heller
In a claustrophobic race against time, a woman must unravel the mystery behind a malevolent crowd before she succumbs to their relentless pursuit.
SS Breakdown: This is another one of the few longlines on this list that feels like it could actually be a movie. Crowds are scary in certain situations. Yet I never would’ve thought to write a horror movie about them. Good on this writer for identifying this as an idea. One of the better concepts on the list.
[ ] must read
[x] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
The Final Score
11 votes
Will Hettinger
Two FBI agents are pitted against a crew of bank robbers–and each other–as they grapple with order and chaos inside their own department and home lives.
SS Breakdown: Wow, this is waaaaaay too vague to assess. I’m assuming there’s a movie here. It’s one of the only scripts with an actual production company behind it (Jerry Bruckheimer). Kaplan and Perrone are good at assessing talent I know. But this is a generic soup of a logline.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent (need more info)
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
The Light At The End
11 votes
Arun Croll
When a solar event fills the sky with endless light that kills everything it touches, a young woman must find a way to escape the house where she is trapped with a doomsday cultist.
SS Breakdown: Heeeeey! It’s Arun Croll! Arun was one of my five finalists in The Last Great Screenplay Contest with his script about the Japanese act of rope bondage where everyone is tied up and someone comes to rob the place. Fun script. Good writer. Timely topic with this latest one, as well. There’s some weird hole opening up in the sun. Very happy for Arun.
[ ] must read
[x] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
The Wolf in Chiefs Clothing
11 votes
Adam Christopher Best
A lovable loser from a family of criminals becomes the Kansas City Chiefs’ most famous superfan. His newfound status is expensive, so he teams up with his imaginary friend–an anthropomorphic version of the team’s wolf mascot–and goes on a bank-robbing spree.
SS Breakdown: Believe it or not, this is actually a true story. I heard about this a little while a go. This dude who’s OBSESSED with the Chiefs and became their most photographed fan because he was always wearing these crazy outfits to the game, was secretly a bank robber. This could be funny if they do it right.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
What’s My Age Again
11 votes
Jackson Kellard
The true story of Kansas teenager Jack Bergeson’s meteoric rise and fall after he discovered a loophole in the state’s constitution that allowed him to run for governor, inciting a statewide youth movement that changed politics forever.
SS Breakdown: I don’t get it. I thought anyone could run for governor. There are age limits? If we’re going to write a movie about some shocking act, the act has to actually be shocking, right? But it just goes to show that “true story” really does give your pitch more weight. If you look at the value of a script on a 1-10 scale, “based on a true story” kicks it up an extra notch or two. Not for me. But for Hollywood.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Chaperones
10 votes
Sarah Rothschild
A single dad tries to bond with his teenage daughter by chaperoning her field trip, only to have to save the world (and possibly her virginity) when an ancient evil is unleashed.
SS Breakdown: I laughed when I read this only because I have no idea what it means. Ancient evils are running around high schools trying to steal girl’s virginities? I need a face here. I need to be able to imagine who the antagonist is. A vague allusion to “evil” actively makes your logline worse. SPECIFICS PEOPLE! SPECIFICS!
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Personal Best
10 votes
Ryan Hoang Williams
Based on the true story of James Hogue, a talented student and long-distance runner who was admitted to Princeton University under the false identity of “Alexi Indris-Santana”–an orphaned, self-educated, teenage ranch hand.
SS Breakdown: Hey man. Everyone knows the Ivy League school selection process is rigged so you know what? Good for James Hogue. And good for true life sports stories which are giving musical artist biopics a run for their money on the Black List.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
The Last Tower
10 votes
Aaron Sala
When a disaster strikes, a family is trapped in their high-rise Miami hotel. With danger closing in fast, they’re left with only one way to go: Up.
SS Breakdown: What’s the disaster? That’s so pivotal in making this a good idea or an average idea. Either way, I’ve always liked ideas contained in high rises, especially where you’re forced to go up. Because up is a contradiction. You save yourself now but the further up you go, the further from safety you are. This is another “movie” idea. Lots of these scripts on the Black List are screenplays only. They’re not cinematic enough. This is.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Undying
10 votes
Ben Ketai
A woman, suffocated by motherhood, has an affair with a man she hasn’t seen since high school– only to discover he has been dead for years.
SS Breakdown: What strikes me about this one is that it’s an old-as-time idea. Yet no one has figured it out yet. Here’s the logline for the 2004 Topher Grace movie, “P.S.” – An unfulfilled divorced woman gets the chance to relive her past when she meets a young man who appears to be her high school sweetheart who died many years before. — Same exact idea right? But that movie realizes that, after you get past the hook where is there to go? It’s a muddled narrative no matter how you look at it. But Netflix and hot production company, 21 Laps, are making this. I suppose because it is a buzzy concept that will get people to click. Especially if you put Jenna Ortega in it!
Beyond the Grave
9 votes
Maximiliano Hernández
Three people at different points of the immigrant experience come together when the mother of a 10-year-old musical prodigy is arrested in an ICE raid.
SS Breakdown: Giving me some “Babel” vibes. Can definitely see why this made the Black List. A serious concept about immigration is pretty much guaranteed to get you near the landing strip. This feels like one of those multi-storyline ensemble scripts that are heavily execution-dependent.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Blasphemous
9 votes
Luke Piotrowski
An inexperienced priest and a charismatic possessed woman form a dark and dangerous bond while on the run from sinister forces within the Catholic Church.
SS Breakdown: How bout we turn this into a romantic comedy and call it, “Separation of Church and Date.” Thank you. I’ll be here all night. This sounds like one of those okay movies. It’s difficult coming up with a movie idea because movies like this one DO GET MADE. Cause it does have a bit of a hook. But they’re not catchy enough to get readers excited to read them. I wish this had one more element to put it over the top.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Boy Fall From The Sky
9 votes
Hunter Toro
An anxious playwright finds himself tangled in a web of deceit, injury, and intellectual property as he adapts his first Broadway musical, Spider-Man: Turn Off the Dark. Inspired by a true story.
SS Breakdown: Best writer name of the lot so far. Who’s going to forget the name “Hunter Toro?” I know I never will. Also, a writer’s best friend: Inspired by a true story. It’s every writer’s secret way to get that ‘based on a true story’ cred while completely making something up. I’ll read any writer-centric story so I’m in.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Die Fast
9 votes
Julian Meiojas
Following a severe, soon to be fatal, brain injury during a violent attack, an NYPD sergeant embarks on a harrowing journey of vengeance, which leaves her only a few hours of adrenaline-bursting consciousness to hunt down those who took her daughter and killed her husband before she dies.
SS Breakdown: If Scott had his own Black List, I’m pretty sure this script would take up the first ten slots. It’s a fairly common idea but the goals, stakes, and urgency are so high that why wouldn’t you read it? You’ll probably finish in half an hour.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Down Came The Rain
9 votes
Katie Found
When a woman gives birth to a spider, she begins to question her unraveling reality and the psychological and arachnid horrors of postpartum motherhood.
SS Breakdown: It’s getting late and I’m getting loopy. So another concept change suggestion. Change the title to “Blame it on the Rain,” and base it on two spiders with the heads of Milli Vanilli. I would definitely watch that. In all seriousness, I feel like I’ve read this script in several different iterations. It’s not my jam, my jelly, my vegemite, or my Nutella.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
If I Had Your Face
9 votes
Ran Ran Wang
When Jo’s best friend, Rina starts dating a white man, she begins transforming into something different: a white woman. Through it all, Jo can’t seem to convince anyone that there is cause for concern. But when three unidentifiable white women turn up dead, Jo realizes that they had all been Asian women who dated the same man, and now that he has Rina in his sights, it’s up to Jo to save her before she becomes his next victim.
SS Breakdown: I’ve read this logline three times now and I’m pretty sure I lost 17 IQ points doing so. Considering I was barely above 100 to begin with, that means I’m officially in double-digits. My dream of becoming a member of Mensa is dying by the minute. This one doesn’t just need a logline rewrite, it needs a logline intervention.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[x] won’t read
Immune
9 votes
Daniel Persitz
The story of Dr. Maurice Hilleman, the brilliant father of modern vaccines, who by deftly negotiating corporate politics, prevented a deadly pandemic and created the groundbreaking vaccines for measles, mumps, rubella, chicken pox and many others that still save eight million lives a year worldwide.
SS Breakdown: I suppose that if you want to get attention, being political and highlighting controversial subject matter is a good strategy. It’s just not the type of script I’m interested in. I need an entertaining component to the story. Let’s not forget this is called the entertainment industry. Not the Let’s Remind You Of What Everyone Is Complaining About On Twitter Industry.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[x] won’t read
Kazan
9 votes
Chris Parizo
The story of the tumultuous relationship between Arthur Miller and Elia Kazan–born out of the success of DEATH OF A SALESMAN and destroyed when Elia Kazan named names to the House Committee on Un-American Activities, resulting in two of the greatest works of the 20th century: THE CRUCIBLE and ON THE WATERFRONT.
SS Breakdown: Am I being punked right now? This had to have been generated by the Black List AI, which Franklin Leonard has, without question, created in secret. I have no idea if this script is any good. It may be amazing. But this is the paradox of the Black List. The scripts that are guaranteed to get you on the list are the exact same scripts that everyone in the industry makes fun of. If Chris hadn’t written this script, Black List AI would have.
Palette
9 votes
Zack Strauss
A woman who discovers she is suffering from severe synesthesia gets recruited into the secretive, cult-like industry of color design by a mysterious corporation but then uncovers the bloody, dark, and twisted reality of what it really takes to make the world’s next great hues.
SS Breakdown: This one sounds wild and original. All writers take note! This is how you come up with a unique concept. One of the best on the list easily.
[x] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
The Nowhere Game
9 votes
Alex Pototsky
Two young women are kidnapped, brought deep into the woods, given a head start, and then hunted down by their sadistic captor all for the pleasure of the online fans of “The Nowhere Game.”
SS Breakdown: Human hunting is always entertaining fare in the book and movie world. The question is, have you come up with an original version of the idea? This isn’t giving me that, at least from the logline they provided. I get submitted a lot of concepts like this one. But you have to give the writer credit for coming up with an actual movie idea. Something someone would buy and turn into a movie and make money off of.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Ferocious
8 votes
Mark Bloom
A team of financially desperate hotel employees embark on a deadly treasure hunt to recover priceless diamonds from a wrecked yacht in the middle of “The Red Triangle,” the world’s most dangerous hunting ground for great white sharks.
SS Breakdown: Marc Bloom DEFINITELY reads Scriptshadow. He knows that when you bring sharks into the sand box, everyone in school shows up to play! There are a few too many things going on in this logline but it still sounds exciting. And another movie idea! Two in a row!
[ ] must read
[x] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Lure
8 votes
Nick Tassoni
When a park ranger ventures into the wilderness to find a missing hiker before a storm, she finds herself lured into the woods by a dangerous, unearthly predator mimicking her dead daughter.
SS Breakdown: Lost in the woods. I just did a consult on a lost in the woods script. There’s something universal about getting lost that gives ideas such as this one a big potential audience. But they always come back to the monster. Is the monster cool? Is the monster interesting? We don’t know yet. But it is a solid setup for a movie.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Roses
8 votes
Evan Twohy
A married man takes his girlfriend on a romantic getaway to a villa. There is a swimming pool.
SS Breakdown: This reminds me of one of my favorite screenplays, “Lamp.” I remember the logline like it was yesterday. “A man buys a lamp and goes home then watches TV.” The midpoint twist of the power going out was, to this day, one of the most enjoyable twists I’ve ever experienced.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to (need more info)
[ ] won’t read
Sundown
8 votes
Nick Hurwitch
Monsters that roam in daylight keep a small, rural family confined to a nocturnal lifestyle. But when their son starts to question the monsters’ existence, his parents must see how far they’re willing to go to keep him safe.
SS Breakdown: I know there are monsters in this one. I’m not sure if the monsters are the main characters or the antagonists. I’m going to reserve judgment in the meantime. But even with this vague logline, just by including monsters, the writer makes their script more marketable than 75% of the loglines on this list.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
The Adults in the Room
8 votes
Jake Disch
On November 1, 2022, FTX was valued at $32 billion. On November 11, 2022, it filed for bankruptcy. This is the incredible true story of the meteoric rise and catastrophic fall of FTX and its enigmatic founder, Sam Bankman-Fried.
SS Breakdown: We all knew this one was coming. Again, these true-story high stakes financial concepts are all the rage right now. Google “richest people ever” or “biggest companies to fall” and you can have your high stakes financial script prepped and ready to send out in six months.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
The Stratford Wife
8 votes
Sarah E. Sinclair
Anne Hathaway, a rebellious woman who has a way with words, weds William Shakespeare, an aspiring actor ten years her junior. They form a plan to sell her plays anonymously. But when William travels to London, Anne is stunned to learn he takes all the credit for himself, leaving her to forever live in the shadow of the greatest playwright to ever live.
SS Breakdown: My brain just officially broke. This sounds like one of those weird fan fiction stories on the Dark Web’s version of Reddit. The kind where half the pages cover the lustful exploits of Anne and William. To the writer’s credit, I could not have come up with this idea if you gave me a million chances.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[x] won’t read
Woodwork
8 votes
Abiel Bruhn
While settling his mother’s estate, awkward loner James reunites with his long-lost brother Rob who oozes wealth, charm, and confidence–but the chance encounter leads to a twisted game of wits and violence.
SS Breakdown: I like the title. I’m too loopy to be able to explain why. I like the contrast between the brothers. Good old fashioned sibling rivalry is always ripe for some drama. Can’t really tell if this is a good idea until I know what the twisted game is. That’s the whole movie right there. If that’s cool, you’ve got a script. If not, you don’t.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
8 Habits of Highly Murderous People
7 votes
Michael Boyle
Psychologist Dr. Martin Park specializes in working with clients trying to curtail extreme violent urges. However, when a series of brutally murdered bodies are discovered in his small New England hometown, it’s up to Martin to figure out which of his patients is responsible.
SS Breakdown: Provocative title. Serial killers always sell tickets. So, marketable. I’m wondering if this commenter is Brian Michael Boyle’s long lost brother. Which would make this really meta, considering that it came right after Woodwork. Are Michael and Brian Michael about to get into a twisted game of wits and violence?
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
American Dreams
7 votes
Tricia Lee & Corey Brown
In the not-so-distant future, an Asian-American woman works at a company where you can hire people to write your dreams. When one of her clients mysteriously dies, she realizes that those who have the power to write your dreams, also have the power to write your nightmares.
SS Breakdown: High concept idea here. In my experience, however, these are tricky scripts to write unless you come up with a clear direction. The reason that one of the best movie setups ever – Flatliners – didn’t work was because it didn’t have a clear direction after the hook. This feels sort of like that but it may just be the way the logline is written.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Blow up the Chat
7 votes
Amos Vernon & Nunzio Randazzo
When their embarrassing, sometimes filthy, possibly cancellable group chat falls into the wrong hands, a group of dudes must go on a madcap scavenger hunt around town to appease a mysterious blackmailer.
SS Breakdown: Okay, this actually sounds kinda good. Because it’s saying something about society and doing it in an entertaining way. There’s this belief in the world that anything you’ve said at any point in your private life is cancellable. But when we’re in safe spaces talking to people privately, we’re more honest, we’re less afraid to offend. And so the idea that that chat could get out into the world and screw up the rest of your life – those are high stakes for such a small idea. Good title too.
[ ] must read
[x] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Boxman
7 votes
Adam Yorke
After a botched bank heist leaves nineteen people locked inside a state-of-the-art vault, the FBI recruits the world’s foremost box-man from federal prison so he can break them out before they suffocate inside.
SS Breakdown: Wow, 19 people is a lot! I would’ve gone with between 5-8. It’s hard to keep track of that many people. Unless people start getting shot and killed. Either way, we’ve got a contained location. Cool idea. Marketable. I think we’ve got another elusive Black List movie on our hands.
[ ] must read
[x] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Displacement
7 votes
Chiara Atik
What’s worse than a cruise? Being a twenty-seven-year-old single woman chaperoning your ninety something grandparents on one, right after a crippling break-up.
SS Breakdown: Cruises have the potential to be great setups for movies, especially if there’s a dark component to your idea. Because you have automatic irony. Cruises are supposed to be heaven. Yet for the character, they’re hell. So I like that about the idea. It’s not clear if there are only old people on this cruise though. Because that changes the idea. Gotta give us the full information if you want us to be able to envision the movie.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Harness
7 votes
Leigh Janiak
In the violent world of underground horse racing, a wannabe female jockey and her trainer brother- in-law become entangled in an illicit relationship full of blood, sweat, and sex that pushes the limits of their bodies and the law.
SS Breakdown: I’m not sure what’s going on here but I like it. Underground horse racing is something I’ve never heard of. But it sounds intriguing. Blood sweat and sex tells me this is going to be dark. I like that. I don’t love gender-swapping for the sake of gender-swapping. But a female jockey feels fresh in this context. I’m in.
[ ] must read
[x] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Mole People
7 votes
Nathan Elston
When an unhoused teen turns up brutally murdered, his estranged brother searches for answers in the underworld of New York City and uncovers a series of horrifying crimes hiding deep in the abandoned subway systems.
SS Breakdown: You lost me with the PC Olympics treatment of the word “homeless.” I’ll tell you why. It denotes a writer who is careful not to offend. And you cannot write anything of substance without offending someone. It’s impossible. So if that’s the place you’re writing from – a place of fear – I know I’m going to read a script full of super safe choices. I don’t think I’ve ever seen something good that played it super safe the whole way through.
Old Time Hockey
7 votes
Kevin Jakubowski
A forty-three-year-old snowplow driver decides to get his high school hockey team back together to play a state championship game.
SS Breakdown: I’m inclined to love this solely because my Chicago brethren Polish brother has written it. I also love these “get the band back together” comedy concepts. There’s potential baked into that setup.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
People Walk Dogs Late At Night In The Suburbs
7 votes
Drake Wootton
A charming high school math teacher-about to be a father-comes up with a plan to course correct his life after having an affair with his student.
SS Breakdown: This one takes you through a rollercoaster, doesn’t it? The title seems innocent enough. So does the first half of the logline. Then it’s like, “Holy crap! This just got serious!” The teacher-student relationship has been one of the more reliable conflicts in fictional storytelling so there’s no reason to stop writing about it now. In fact, now’s probably the best time to write about it since people aren’t expecting it as much. Poor Things worked, in part, because it crossed a lot of lines you didn’t expect due to the fact that so many people over these last few years are playing it safe in fear of offending.
[ ] must read
[x] curious
[ ] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Please Come Back
7 votes
Mike George
A young couple who perform rituals to raise people from the dead get more than they bargained for when they attempt to re-animate a young girl who doesn’t remember how she died.
SS Breakdown: Speaking of Poor Things! Another reanimation concept. This is another idea that doesn’t give us enough info. I would need to know how she died to be able to tell if this was a good idea or not.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Propel
7 votes
Jeremy Marwick
A commercial diver fights to survive after a boating accident leaves her for dead underwater.
SS Breakdown: Being stuck underwater is the setup for a life-harrowing situation with goals, stakes, and urgency. But is there enough here for a movie? At least with Whalefall, we were in a moving whale! Here, it feels like we’re just stuck in the underside of some boat or something.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[x] decent
[ ] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Unnie
7 votes
Lynn Yu
In the cutthroat world of K-POP, a group’s debut is threatened when someone begins to violently attack its members.
SS Breakdown: There may not be a topic in the world I know less about than K-Pop. With that said, A LOT OF PEOPLE LOVE K-POP. So there’s an audience out there if you like this subject matter. And I do love stories that highlight the irony of these worlds. They look fun and happy on the outside. But inside, they’re ugly and dangerous. If this script focuses on that, it could work.
[ ] must read
[ ] curious
[ ] decent
[x] if I have to
[ ] won’t read
Genre: Drama
Premise: Courted by colleges and sponsors alike, a burnt-out tennis prodigy fights to maintain dominance against her Academy rival as she hurtles toward the existential decision of turning Pro–a choice that will force her to double down on her dream or walk away from the future she’s fought for.
About: This script finished with 6 votes on last year’s Black List. Zachary Joel Johnson was an assistant at Skydance, Scott Free, and Dreamworks Animation.
Writer: Zachary Joel Johnson
Details: 103 pages
Iman Vellani for Faheema?
I’ve been saving this one.
If you’re a new Scriptshadow subscriber, this is where I tell you I used to teach tennis. And, oddly enough, I get at least two tennis scripts a year to review. I’m not sure why the sport is written about so much. It’s inherently boring. I mean how do you tell a story about a sport that nobody in the world understands how to score????
If Player A has Ad-In on match point and the audience doesn’t know what “ad-in” or “match point” means, there’s literally no way to convey the drama. This is something Elad (writer of the other Black List tennis script on the list – Court 17) and I spent hours upon hours discussing while developing that script – how much we should teach the audience. Or if we should just leave it. It was agonizing to discuss and reminded me why I get so frustrated whenever I encounter a tennis screenplay.
The solution is probably to do what Challengers did. That’s the last tennis script I reviewed on the site, the one that stars Zendaya. The script was less about the tennis and more about the dirty love triangle at the center of it.
Believe me. I want this script to be an ace. Because if it is, it means the next 90 minutes is going to fly by. If it isn’t, it means the next 90 minutes is going to feel like the first 10 minutes of The Seeker, which felt like 10 years.
Ya follow that?
Faheema Nassar is an introverted 17 year old tennis prodigy who just won her first professional tournament. However, despite her coach, Bebe, and father, Omar, wanting her to turn pro, Faheema is reluctant. If you turn pro, you can never play college tennis, and Faheema wants to play tennis at Columbia.
So she rejects the prize money and heads back to her tennis academy in Florida to train. There, she’s met with a new face, 19 year old mean girl, Caroline Werber. Werber is only here because Faheema is the best junior talent in the world. By playing alongside her, people will notice Caroline.
Soon after, Prince Rackets shows up and wants to sponsor Faheema. Again, if she does this, she can’t play college tennis. So she’s reluctant to sign. Also, they’re barely giving her any money. Faheema realizes that if she wins the 18s Nationals, that gives you a wild card slot into the U.S. Open. Prince would have to double their offer if she pulls that off. So that becomes her goal.
The problem is, everyone there is obsessed with Faheema and works her to death. She’s getting burnt out. If that isn’t bad enough, Caroline keeps talking her down, telling her she’s worthless, trying to destroy her mental game. And then you have a former Russian Wimbledon champ coming in to train Faheema who’s even more of a c**t than Caroline! If Faheema can somehow survive all this pressure, she can begin her promising career. The question is, does she want to?
Tennis players are actually interesting people.
They tend to be loners at heart. They’re introverted. They’re socially awkward. As a tennis instructor, I can confirm that the kids who the parents brought to my classes were never the cool athletic types. They were always the kids who were a little bit “off,” lol.
I think that’s what Johnson is trying to capture here with Faheema. She’s anxious, socially awkward, introverted. Unfortunately, this combo makes her unlikable. She’s a super downer who never smiles, is never happy, who never likes playing tennis, who doesn’t make an effort to connect with anyone, who doesn’t like any of the people who train her, including her own father.
Why would we root for someone like that?
This is the crux of screenwriting here people. Forget that this is a tennis script. It could be a superhero script, a guy-with-a-gun script, a comedy, a Western, a buddy-cop flick — IF WE DON’T LIKE THE MAIN PERSON WE’RE FOLLOWING, NOTHING ELSE MATTERS.
And I think too many writers craft their protagonists without that in mind. To them it’s like a mound of clay that you shape on a whim. If it works it works. If not, it doesn’t. Oh well. Screenwriting starts with making the audience care about the main character and I just don’t see any strategy at all in this script to achieve that.
I’m not even sure what the central conflict is for our main character.
She’s torn between turning pro or playing for Columbia. Why does she want to play for Columbia? Columbia doesn’t even have a good tennis team (which is noted in the script). So why is that so important to you? That question is NEVER answered. It almost seems like Johnson confuses the fact that turning pro means you can’t play in college OR go to college. But that’s not true. You can go back to college after playing on the professional tennis tour. You just can’t play on the tennis team. So what’s really at stake here with this choice of Faheema’s? As far as I can tell, nothing. And it’s supposed to be the central conflict in the script.
This means we have a character we don’t root for in a situation with weak stakes. That’s a bad combo. It’s hard to create something good out of that scenario.
You need to create stakes that hold up in the real world. For example, Faheema decides she’s going to play the Nationals in the hopes of winning in order to double her contract offer from Prince. But what does that really mean? She’ll make 160 thousand dollars instead of 80 thousand.
You have to think about these things from the perspective of the reader. Is the reader really going to say, “Oh man! I was not interested when she was only going to make 80 grand. But now that she’s going to get 160 grand?? I’m all in. I really want her to succeed!!!” Stakes have to feel giant in movies. They can’t be casual. They can’t be ‘sort of big.’
The best aspect of the script was probably the relationship between Faheema and Caroline. Caroline, by the way, had actual stakes attached to her actions. She was 19. She was going to stop getting funded by her parents unless she made the tour. So she needed to win the Nationals to get that wild card or else she’d be forced to quit tennis. THOSE ARE STAKES. Why didn’t we have stakes like that for Faheema?
But anyway, seeing how cruel Caroline was to Faheema provided an ample amount of conflict within the tennis academy. And there’s a nice moment late in the movie where Caroline finally apologizes for being so awful to Faheema. But even that storyline suffered from Caroline being a two-dimensional character for most of the movie (she’s Mean Girl To The Max whenever she walks in the room).
Unfortunately, this script does not give me hope that tennis scripts are now easy to write. Challengers is still my number 1 script. Court 17 is number 2. Everything else is a distant third.
[ ] What the hell did I just read?
[x] wasn’t for me
[ ] worth the read
[ ] impressive
[ ] genius
What I learned: Sometimes, how you want to portray your protagonist makes them unlikable. And it’s your job to recognize this and decide if that’s really want you want to do. For example, if you want to create a story around a really depressed person, well, depressed people aren’t likable. So you either need to have a plan to make them likable or you need to scrap your idea entirely. — It can be done by the way. Making a depressing person likable. Sometimes it’s as simple as giving them a sense of humor. Faheema smiled once in this movie. The final line of the script! Just have her crack some jokes. Have her have fun. If your character is down all the time, I PROMISE YOU we will not like them.
The secret to writing a great screenplay with the least amount of effort.
Jayne Mansfield, star of the 1963 film, “Promises Promises”
I’m always thinking of new ways to crack the screenwriting code. Screenwriting is funny in that, at its core, it’s simple. Write a story with a beginning, middle, and end. Make sure it’s interesting. Voila. That’s it!
But like any skill, in order to attain mastery, it can get quite complex. I still remember when my first screenwriting teacher told me that each scene needed to achieve five different things. Pretty sure, in that moment, my brain short-circuited.
What happens to most screenwriters is that they start off believing in the former – that screenwriting is easy. They’ve seen movies. They know what movies they like and don’t like, so they figure they’ll write movies similar to what they like and that’s all you need in order to be a good screenwriter.
What happens to the majority of these writers is that their scripts don’t get any success or recognition and they figure that the system is rigged, probably to reward nepotism, so they peace out, never to write another screenplay again. Many of the remaining screenwriters become obsessed with cracking the code and, over the years, delve into the most minute details of the craft, figuring that if they learn EVERYTHING, they’ll be able to write a great script.
Most of these writers never return from that dark place. They just go deeper and deeper into the minutia, looking for the meaning of it all. I’m here to tell you that if you get trapped in that place, it’s just as hard to write a good script there as if you’re a beginner and think writing is easy. Down there, you’re writing from a place of technicality, which is hard to build a moving impactful story around.
Now let me be clear. I’m not saying all technical thought is wrong. There’s a mathematical element to screenwriting that cannot be ignored. The fact that you have to keep your story between 100-120 pages alone means you have to be strategic about how you plot, how you approach your character arcs, where you place your setups and payoffs. But we never want that aspect of your writing to impede upon the ultimate goal. Which is to write a great story.
Today’s article was born out of my newsletter article (sign up if you haven’t already: carsonreeves1@gmail.com) where I discussed “story engines.” This is the same idea but I wanted to make it even simpler for you. In fact, I would say this is the simplest strategy to create a good story. You don’t have to learn any technical terms. You don’t even have to know how to structure a script. As long as you follow this one rule, you can write a good screenplay.
Want to know what it is?
Promise.
No, that’s it. A promise.
All writing is is a promise. You extend a promise to the reader that if they keep reading, they will be rewarded.
Think about it.
Barbie is dancing at the beginning of Barbie, living her best life, when she freezes and asks everyone, “Does anybody else here ever think about dying?” That’s a promise. It’s a promise because we now want to find out why Barbie is having these thoughts. To prove why this promise works, imagine if Barbie had never vocalized these thoughts. She just goes about her perfect day and then goes to sleep. Why should we keep reading?
Promises can be big. They can be small. As long as there is at least one compelling promise in play at every stage of your story, the reader WILL TURN THE PAGE. Let me say that again. As long as at any point in your story there is a compelling promise that has been made, the reader will want to find out what happens next.
What does a bad promise look like? “Here’s a funny character.” That’s not a promise. The character may be funny to you but who knows if it’s funny to others. So we might not want to see any more of them. Remember, the key to the “promise” strategy is that we want to turn the page. If the promise isn’t good enough for that, the strategy won’t work.
So what are some actionable promises to keep the reader reading?
A dead body – This is one of the strongest promises you can make because who doesn’t want to find out who killed this person? Or why?
Will these two people get together? – We were talking about this in the story engine article. One of the early promises in Killers of the Flower Moon was, “If you keep watching, you’ll get to find out if these two get together or not.” This is one of the most often-used promises in the trade.
Will these two people resolve their issues? – This is popular in the team-up genre. Two characters who don’t get along are forced to team up with one another. The promise is that if you keep watching, you get to find out if they eventually find peace with one another.
Promises can be more immediate as well. And should be, depending on the situation. Early on in screenplays, the reader’s attention span is shorter. So you should be looking to introduce promises that have quicker resolutions.
A trained killer gets locked in a room with a group of thugs (The Equalizer). The dramatic irony is through the roof here (we know the thugs are in a lot of trouble) so the promise is strong. We can’t wait for him to kick their a$$. How do I know this promise is effective? Because I know every single one of you reading this right now would turn the page to find out what The Equalizer does to those thugs.
One of the most powerful promises is a strong mystery. I was just watching the pilot episode for the show, A Murder At the End of the World. Early on, we see a couple discover a dead body and then (spoiler) the killer catches them in the act, raises his gun to shoot, but before we show what happens, we cut to the present day. We know one half of the couple, the girl, is still alive, since she’s talking to us. But there’s no mention of what happened to the boyfriend. Was he shot that day? That’s a promise that the writer is making to you. “If you keep reading, I will answer that question.”
Later still in the episode, a man shows up at the woman’s door and says that she’s invited to meet one of the richest men in the world. Another promise. If you keep reading, you get to find out who this man is and why he’s inviting her.
You should have multiple promises going on at all times. They shouldn’t all be giant promises (a girl is possessed, a billionaire is murdered, a man is still in love with his girlfriend after spending 42.6 years in cryogenic stasis) or the promises will compete against each other. But you should be injecting smaller promises on top of your larger promises. I call this “layering.” Because you want the reader to stay engaged in the short term. So you make these immediate promises (The Equalizer just got locked in this room with these thugs. I promise you that if you keep reading, I’ll let you know what happens within the next two pages).
Just like all of writing, there is subjectivity involved in how compelling a promise is. You may think I want to learn more about how all this plastic got into this whale’s stomach, but you’d be wrong. So you’re always gambling in that sense. Which is why you want to lean into the types of promises that have proven to work over time.
Compelling mysteries, whodunits, will-they-or-won’t-they-get-together, unresolved relationships, a loved one has been kidnapped.
Here are some promises from popular movies throughout the years:
An alien is after me: No One Will Save You
Bank robbing brothers are trying to stay one step ahead of sheriffs: Hell or High Water
A giant shark is terrorizing the beach, killing everything in its path: Jaws
A dangerous violent man is coming unhinged: Joker
A man is erased from existence and sees what the world is like without him: It’s A Wonderful Life
People are stuck in a dangerous video game: Jumanji.
In each of these stories, a giant promise is made that makes it nearly impossible for us not to want to keep reading. Now, of course, you do have to write compelling characters for this strategy to work. But if you can do that, you can basically keep a story going forever. And if you think that’s not true, let me point you to Marvel, to Fast and Furious, to Star Wars, to your favorite TV show. Those stories go on and on and on without any real end because the writers keep making compelling promises. Marvel does so at the end of every movie with their post-credit scenes. Now you can do the same. And reap the rewards from doing so. :)
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Today we take on the genre YOU SHOULD BE FOCUSING ON if making money is your priority as a screenwriter.
Genre: True Crime
Premise: Set in 1981, a serial killer kidnaps his latest victim, who proceeds to use religion to convince him that he is not the killer he has accepted himself to be.
About: Huge bidding war for this one that Amazon/MGM just won. It was an article in Vanity Fair. Stephen Morin’s killings are mostly forgotten over time due to several reasons, one of them being that the victim in this story, Margy Palm, wasn’t interested in selling the rights to her story to Hollywood, who she felt would turn it into some cheap surface-level story about the power of God. Only recently having gone through therapy, Palm has come to the conclusion that it’s finally time that her story be told.
Writer: Julie Miller
Details: About 6000 words long (the length of 4 Scriptshadow posts)
Sydney Sweeney is perrrrrrfect for this role.
What is it that Jerry Maguire said on that fateful day of his firing?
Oh yeah.
SHOWWWW MEEEE THE MONAAAAAAAYYYY!!!
Ever since the spec boom ended, screenwriters have been looking for a substitute source of instant income, a way where they could write something and get paid for it immediately. Well, my friends, that something is here. It’s called True Crime.
True Crime has always sold. Heck, they were making these things as TV movies all the way back in the 70s. But ever since podcasts supercharged the genre, True Crime has become more marketable than ever.
From The Watcher to Dirty John to Love & Death to The Staircase to The Act to Mindhunter to Dahmer. And now you have this whole new sub-genre of shows inspired by true crime, like Only Murders in the Building, Based on a True Story, and The Afterparty.
Without mincing words, you have to be more into television than movies if you want to sell one of these things. But it actually doesn’t matter because, in order to sell them, you’re going to write an article first. Whoever then buys the article will decide if they want to turn it into a movie or a TV show.
“True Crime: True Faith,” set in Texas in 1981, introduces us to Stephen Morin, a serial killer who seems to have escaped mainstream attention due to the fact that he was killing at the same time as the much flashier hipper serial killer, Ted Bunny.
Morin targets a young pretty blonde wife named Margy Palm, who’s returning to her car from K-Mart after doing some Christmas shopping. At this point, Morin had raped and killed dozens of women, something Palm wasn’t yet aware of. But she knew once he took her hostage that he was an angry dangerous man.
And yet, as he made her drive outside of San Antonio to a more secluded area to do who knows what with her, Palm didn’t feel afraid. A religious woman, she began explaining to Morin that he had the devil inside of him and during the many times when they’d park (Morin would get hungry, for example, and randomly head to some fast food restaurant) she would attempt to cast the demons out of his head.
At first, Morin was furious that he’d been stuck with some “religious freak.” But the more Palm spoke about God, the more sense it made to the killer. Palm busted out some scripture for Morin to read and soon, the two were sharing deep intense experiences from their pasts, bonding on a level that even Palm admits, to this day, she had never experienced before.
After 8 hours of driving around, Palm had successfully converted Morin into a born-again Christian. His lifelong anger had all but evaporated. She told him that there was a preacher he needed to visit in another part of Texas and took Morin to the train station so he could go to this man and confess his sins. She gave him her scripture and off he went. The police were waiting for him at the station where he was still reading the scripture.
Morin would later go on to receive three life sentences and the death penalty. But Morin started to call Palm from prison and, unthinkably, the two became friends. Palm would come to see him 15 times over the next four years and visited him a day before his execution. Morin called those last four years the best four years of his life because he found God.
The real Margy Palm
Time to start writing some true crime articles, right!
I know some of you are like, “ehhh, I don’t know. I just want to write scripts, Carson. I don’t want to write short stories or articles or any of that nonsense.” I get it. We writers are creatures of habit. But let me say this. One of the things I would’ve changed when I was a young screenwriter was not being so stubborn. I thought I knew how to do it and I was only going to do it that way. I know that if I was more open to other ideas and trying new things, my path would’ve been different.
There’s a reason these articles are selling beyond them being true crime. Much like short stories, they’re easily digestible to busy industry people. Which means that when agents send these packages out, people are more willing to read them because the time investment is much smaller.
So, how do you find a good true crime story to write about?
It’s not that different from looking for any concept. You’re looking for fresh angles that haven’t been explored yet. You’re looking for interesting characters, meaty parts that actors would want to play. And as I tell you all the time, you’ve discovered a gold mine if the true crime story has some element of irony to it.
One particular sentence stuck out to me in this article. “I became friends with a serial killer.” Take a good long look at the line. That line is the face of irony. You’re not supposed to be friends with a serial killer. Serial killers are evil. Especially ones who wanted to kill you. And yet that’s the primary relationship here – one where this offbeat friendship emerges from the most unlikely of circumstances.
I can imagine how they might adapt this into a TV show. You start off with this scene in prison where Palm has come to visit Morin. We don’t know who these people are yet or the context under which they know each other. But they’re laughing. They’re having a good time. And then we smash-cut back to that fateful day where he grabs her in the parking lot and forces her into the car.
You could have a lot of fun juxtaposing those two worlds. And, actually, you could write this as a movie as well, if you wanted. Any time you see a tight timeframe, that’s ideal for a film. That 8 hours that Morin kidnaps Palm for… that’s a perfect timeframe for a movie, especially if you could convince us that she really was in danger and that he’s going to kill her.
But this one comes back to the characters. Good memorable characters are sooooooooo hard to write. They’re so hard to write. It amazes me whenever one shows up in a movie. And it shocks me when one shows up in a screenplay, where you’re even less likely to run into well-written characters.
Morin goes through this clear arc as a character that is perfect for a story. But he’s also volatile. The article points out that one second he’s sharing his biggest regrets to Palm and the next he’s screaming at her for being rich and having a perfect life. Then you have Palm, who’s the perfect underdog. She’s the overmatched girl who should die just like the 30 girls before her. But she’s ACTIVE and takes a different tactic than you’re supposed to take. And it ends up working and… who’s not going to root for that character?
Also, the same rule for storytelling applies today as it did 100 years ago: If you have at least one dead body, you’ve got yourself a story.
[ ] What the hell did I just read?
[ ] wasn’t for me
[xx] worth the read
[ ] impressive
[ ] genius
What I learned: So many writers revert to guns and violence for their characters to solve problems. But I promise you that it is ALWAYS more satisfying to the audience and to the reader if the character OUTWITS their opponent. That’s what this story is about. It’s about a woman who outthinks her captor.
You have to give it to Hollywood.
The town does have a sense of humor.
I mean why else would you plop a Taylor Swift concert movie right in the middle of Horror Season?
The tall gangly crooner does possess a certain “Ichabod Crane” quality, which may have been the secret sauce to getting her film to 100 million dollars. People showed up, fully expecting a Conjuring-like experience. And some of them got it. Looking at 50,000 Swifties blathering through tears is scarier than anything I saw in The Exorcist. But most were like, “Wait, this woman is just singing for 2 hours?”
But in all seriousness, the gigantic haul of Taylor Swift’s film, when seen through the lens of a year that also celebrated Barbie’s titanic box office, has begged the question: Is it time we start writing more for female audiences?
It used to be that men generated all the box office. Young men in particular. Then the post-Bridesmaids era combined with the #metoo movement demanded the industry focus more on female-centric films. They did, to mixed results, but certain films (Captain Marvel, Wonder Woman) proved that the ladies liked to show up. But those were films that catered to both men and women.
This 1-2 Barbie-Swiftie punch has rewritten the box office code. Now, you can make movies for JUST WOMEN and still eclipse 9 figures.
So, this means write movies only for women, right?
Ehhhhhh, let’s dial back the estrogen on that one. The Marvels, a movie designed not just to attract women, but to actively repel men, is coming out on November 10, and its box office tracking is placing it at as the lowest Marvel movie opening ever, less than The Incredible Hulk. Unless they can figure out a last second way to give Slenderman, err, I mean Taylor Swift, a cameo in the film, it’s gearing up to sink the comic book studio faster than the Andrea Doria.
As Taylor Swift would say, “I’m not that… innocent.”
Taylor said that, right?
While the Taylor Swift movie may have been too scary for me, I did want to check out a festive movie this weekend so I went with Poe’s suggestion and fired up, “Totally Killer,” on Amazon.
The film, a slasher version of “Back to the Future,” focuses on Jamie, a high school student whose mother is murdered by the Sweet 16 Killer, a notorious masked serial killer who, 35 years ago, killed 3 teenage girls.
Jamie utilizes the help of her nerdy friend who happens to have built a time machine to travel back to the year 1987. She figures if she can identify and take out the serial killer, she can not only save those three girls, but she can save her mom.
Along the way, she runs into her 16 year old mother, who turns out to be a total bizatch. She’ll have to team up with her, though, to stop the murders. But the other girls are so incredibly stupid that they practically walk into their deaths, no matter what Jamie does. Still, if she can identify the killer, she can hopefully stop the death of her mom.
I can promise you this. Totally Killer was a lot better than the Jack Skellington biopic at theaters this weekend. I mean the Taylor Swift movie.
The movie had a surprisingly edgy sense of humor. There’s a subplot with a couple of dopey 80s cops who do nothing but hang around and chat. Our introduction to them has us eavesdropping on their first conversation: “Old people, sick people, and people with dogs.” There’s a pause and the other cop says, “That’s the order you hate people in?” “Yep.” Not gonna lie. I LOL’d hard.
And conceptually, it’s kind of perfect. Something I’ve told you guys from the get-go is that every screenwriter gets into the game to rewrite their favorite movies. The mistake they all make is that they literally rewrite their favorite movies. So there’s no originality. And the script looks like a big fat ripoff.
Totally Killer shows you the way around this. You take your favorite movie and you move it into another genre. Here, we obviously have Back to the Future. But the writers frame it within the slasher genre. This allows them to copy a lot of the BTTF beats without looking like copycats.
But even beyond that, it’s a surprisingly effective combination. One of the many genius aspects of Back to the Future was how quickly it moved. I’ve found that whenever anyone tries to copy the movie (Peggy Sue Got Married) or replicate that same Michael J. Fox energy (Teen Wolf), the movies just sit there. It shows you just how hard it is to keep the pace up in any plot.
By adding a slasher element to the blueprint, Totally Killer’s plot hits the ground running. The second Jamie ends up in 1987, she’s got to prevent three murders from happening. I thought the writers did a really good job with that.
The movie only has two faults, one small and one big. I thought it could’ve leaned more into the offensive world of the 1980s. It would be a TOTAL SHOCK for a 16 year old girl from 2023 to go to school in 1987. Every safe space she knew would’ve exploded in front of her. And while Totally Killer does some of that (a boy shoves Jamie by the chest as she loudly declares, “Unwanted touch! Unwanted touch!” And the guy doesn’t care nor does anyone sympathize with her), I always say that you need to wring every last drop out of what’s unique about your concept, especially with fish-out-of-water scenarios. Let’s have some TRULY offensive 1980s things happen here.
The bigger issue is one that keeps this from being a classic, and that’s the main actress. She wasn’t right for the role. She’s too dour. Too restrained. Too low-key. Too sarcastic. There’s a reason Back to the Future is one of the top 20 movies of all time. It’s how charming the main actor is.
Totally Killer is kind of like seeing how Back to the Future would’ve played had they kept Eric Stoltz in the lead. The actress, Kiernan Shipka, is meant for more serious rolls. I mean you can see flashes of this being a great film if they had only cast a more charming actress, although now that I’m thinking about it, the female equivalent of Michael J. Fox may not exist. Heck, they haven’t been able to find an equivalent for Michael J. Fox on the guy’s side either.
But if we’re keeping score for the feel-good horror movie of the 2023 Halloween season, Totally Killer gets my vote.
Before we wrap up today’s ode to Peter Cushing, I mean Taylor Swift, I have to exit with a gripe. Rotten Tomatoes needs to place new rules on their horror scoring. There is no other genre they get wrong more than horror. And it’s usually WAAAAAAY over-praising horror content.
After Totally Killer, I was in a good mood. I wanted to pop in another fun horror movie or show, something that could both spook and spike my funny bone. I kept seeing ads for Chucky, the TV show adaptation of the 1980s cult classic, Child’s Play. What caught my eye was the out-of-this-world Rotten Tomatoes scores. We’re talking above 90% for all three seasons!
I thought, this show can’t possibly be that good. But I gave it a chance anyway cause why not. My friends, I watched the pilot for this show. I know certain animals that could’ve directed a better episode of television. It’s not that the show was bad. It’s that it was LIFELESS. From the casting to the production value to the acting to the scene-writing. It was soooooooo so so so so so so boring.
I was unexpectedly pissed that I’d been tricked so badly, since I knew I smelled a rat from the start. I just have to remember that it doesn’t matter what kind of score a show gets. IF IT IS NEVER TRENDING ON SOCIAL MEDIA and IF NO ONE ON THE INTERNET IS WRITING ABOUT IT, it’s bad. That’s all you need to know. I had never seen Chucky mentioned once on social media and I’d never seen anybody write about it. From now on, that’s my gauge for whether to check out a show. I suggest it be yours as well.
Okay, did anybody see the Stephen Merchant film this weekend? I mean Taylor Swift film? What did you think?